| "Emerald Flame" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] |
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Reviewed By: noneofyourdamncrap On: April 07, 2005 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
YO! WHAT UP ALL!?! DUDE I WANT MORE FIGHTING! TEH HELL WITH THE EMOTION CRAP!
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Reviewed By: nightmaregod On: April 06, 2005 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo so like this aint ending anytime soon right? cool.
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Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol sry i not revew but thanx to God-King for saying what i couldnt. it was like i said sad, but well written. no need to repeat myself. keep up the goodnes of work. ^_^
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Reviewed By: kicken 2500 On: April 05, 2005 19:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
due i think we need more fights and yes, much much more FUCKING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!HAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAH AHA
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Reviewed By: Shinning-King On: April 05, 2005 03:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah havent had time to revew. ok from what i read, it was awesome, then like lame. the last one was lame. i guess i cant complain though, you are writers blocked. it ok. it was only a little lame. but i think we all want more fucking!
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Reviewed By: God-King On: April 04, 2005 23:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
cool chap man. dont worry bout that writers block crap. oh and Shadow-King did read the story but he had some school project to do, so he asked me to tell you that the story was sad and...crap what else...oh yeah and that it was extremly well writen. he also said that writers block sux but you can get through it, if you need help, then try and find new ways to inspier yourself, like watching new anime, or old anime, going to new or old places to influence your mind. thats about all he got to say. so we think its good and to update whenever you can.
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Reviewed By: nightmaregod On: April 04, 2005 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude thats fuckin weak. i know school is inportint, but UNFUCKING COOL! this is shady as fuck, so like you wont be back till like summer?
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Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 11:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no prob. lol me no like bad medicen of school. curses, i must reterne as well. T_T when ever you can update is fine. ^_^
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Title: Writer's Block
Reviewed By: Majin_Broly [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 07:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
I am overcoming a major writers block and with school back it's getting difficult to write right now. I've written and re-written chapter 13 FOUR TIMES and now got it going but still am having trouble writing. It might be awhile before I get it up so bare with me because it's hard for me too. But I promise to keep up with this ASAP but it's difficult and the story goes through alot of plot twists real quick because my mind is going at a snails pace.
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Reviewed By: richbitch On: April 03, 2005 19:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats so awsome that you used the DBZ/DBGT together. that makes the story so much awsome.
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Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow what a good story. lol ok ok we get no endi chapi for happi readi. .....i dont even know what i just wrote. lol and no problem on the summery thing. hope the next chap is as good as the others. ^_^
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Reviewed By: noneofyourdamncrap On: April 03, 2005 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn i fuckin slept like all week, i hella missed some chapters. so like whats going on? the stories ending, then its not? i am so confused.
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Reviewed By: BROLY_ROCKS On: April 03, 2005 17:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice chap. and yeah more action/ lemon would rock.
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Reviewed By: BROLY_ROCKS On: April 02, 2005 12:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn right you aint endin it now! it to good to end!
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Reviewed By: God-King On: April 02, 2005 02:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know, i think Shadow-King said it best,:"that was a AWESOME FIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i am glad that the story isint ending" cool make more.
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