| "Emerald Flame" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 00:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok how bout this: "I AM A GGGGGOOOOOOOOOODDDDD" screamed the greatest worrier, as his hulking form tore across the univers. the strongest nightmare, born of pure rage and hate. the one being powerful enough to put fear into death itself. The Legendary Super-Sajin. Broly. can a force of pure evil ever know what its like to feal true fear and pain? what about love? is love an emotion a monster like broly can even feal?what would happen if broly, the great terror of the univers, was as weak as thoughs he killed?can broly ever be forgiven for the crimes he has commited across thousends of galixies? and what is the true extent of his power? these answers and more...if you dare call yourself brave enough to continue. [insert your persinal comment or what you want to put hear.] that is just something i came up with a little bit ago. you can use it if you want but you dont have to. i know its kinda lame and it sux, but you can tweek it if you wish. so yeah i suck at these. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 00:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a AWESOME FIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i am glad that the story isint ending, and i will think of an opaning type paragraph for you. that was kinda sad too. will he come back, or i think i know whats going to happen. oh well. i guess ill have to wait to find out and see. that, like i said, was the coolest fight to date. i realy hat haveing to wait but i guess i cant rush greatness. lol so hurry and make new chap. ^_^
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Reviewed By: cRoCk-MiStEr__CURMIT On: April 01, 2005 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DaMn MaN YoU ReAlY gOiNg To EnD tHiS sToRy SoOn!?! LaMe. ThEn MaKe MoRe ChApTeRs FiRsT. It WaS A gOoD StOrY wIlE It lAsTeD.
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Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 16:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holly shit you got a lot of damn revews. i mean damn 2 whole pages. good for you. ^_^ i cant wait for the finalie.(although i kinda dont want to see it end. T-T oh well you do what you will. and good luck toping yourself. lol) damn i just missed God-King, lol oh well. i want to say thanx for all thoughs that revewed. Shadow-King
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Reviewed By: God-King On: April 01, 2005 16:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah i am with Shinning-King, this is getting better and better. i hope you mack the last chapters grand and massive. keep it up. late
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Reviewed By: Shinning-King On: April 01, 2005 15:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know, this story keeps getting better and better. damn shame if its comming to an end so soon. lol well what can we do you are the writer.
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: noneofyourdamncrap On: April 01, 2005 10:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn that fight fucking rocked. and the one later mmm...later (drools)
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Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 02:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY CRAP THAT WAS A KICK ASS F'IN FIGHT!!!! AND YOU SAY IT GETS BETTER!?! DAMN I CANT WAIT!!!!!
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Reviewed By: twackfackler On: March 31, 2005 17:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN THE FIGHT WAS AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CAN YOU HAVE ANOTHER LIKE IT!?!
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Reviewed By: nightmaregod On: March 31, 2005 15:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn that was a kicken battle. i cant wait to see if broly fights goku or not.
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Reviewed By: BROLY_ROCKS On: March 31, 2005 13:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy shit, that fight with the ssj3 broly was without a dought, the...COOLEST FIGHT I HAVE YET TO READ!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kicken 2500 On: March 31, 2005 13:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
man this story has everything you need, good plot and some fucking deep ass fight scense! i want more soon. and yeah i got a dent in my car so i know how youi feel.
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Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 13:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy crap that was f'in awsome. i mean dude it f'in rocked. sux bout the car dude. lol please dont leave us haggin.
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Reviewed By: God-King On: March 31, 2005 02:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad for a broly story. i think i like it. corse i would like to see longer chapters, but then agian i like to read. nice plot and i would like to say good job and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: cRoCk-MiStEr__CURMIT On: March 30, 2005 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NiCe StOrY DuDe KeEp On WrItInG!
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