Title: Great start mate! ^-^
Reviewed By: Jenny Galaxie (not logged in, but with time!) On: March 25, 2005 12:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool, Yami has his own body now! But I would love to know more about your character, I cant help but think I heard of her name and idea before, but I think it is only my imagination! So sorry, but I do like the beginning, she seems to have a great family! Which most characters dont have (looks at other storys). So I hope you UPDATE soon enough, and get on well with the fic and at last I hope you get it finished, because some Autors (unluckily including myself) havnt finished one of their story's. SO GOOD!!!!!!!LUCK!!!!!!!!!!!TO!!!!!!!!!!YOU!!!!!!!!!!!! PS:I like Yami too, he is my favourite character^-^!!!
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