| "Behind Enemy Lines: A Bleach Story" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: SilentHypoCrit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm. Interesting idea. One obviously startet before the Soul Society Part. I would recommend a little rewrite after the arc is finished and you have some more information, about how things do work out after all. You based ichigo on the first few episodes but in my opinion he is just a little too rude, but thats your decission. Byakuyas interaction with the others, too is a little OOC. As known form later encouters he would not hesitate once to give detention for the others. I would imagine him more impartial and bound to the local rules. I also find it strange that Ichigo is so averse to Magic, he could be at least interested. And Byakuya he would considere them maybe inferrior but not like total bull. If someone had really learned the rules of the Wizarding world it would be him. A smaller team of Shinigami might also be a good idea. Now I have the imagination that there are like 40 of them or so. If there are not more than 10, say so and give them names. Ok that was a lot of critisicm. Sorry. I liked to read it nevertheless, eventhough I see a lot of room for improvement.
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Reviewed By: bobbyneko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol! hilarious! and the best part about it: hitsugaya's gonna be in it, yay!!! oh byakuya is freakin hilarious, i love him ^^ write your next chap soon!
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Reviewed By: Kiba-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 16:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Man, why do I have to find cool fics when I'm on my way to class?? Damnit. I don't have time to read this but wow, you had me hooked at "If I did own either one, Harry would be a girl. And Ichigo's name WOULDN'T be Strawberry." Eee!! That's so fabulous. I'm writing a Saiyuki HP crossover right now, and it's so cool to see the same idea in other anime fandoms. I absolutely have to read this, and I will.... when I get back from class. And you know, if you *really* want to appease the fangirls, you'd throw Renji in ;)
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Reviewed By: Bittersweetmonkey On: March 26, 2005 12:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm liking this. It's funny and I've never read a Harry Potter Bleach crossover before so it's a bit weird. O.O You should update soon.
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Reviewed By: ShadowAngelic On: March 26, 2005 12:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!! Finally a Hp+ Bleach crossover. Man, was this funny!!!!!! I laughed so much. Continue or die!
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