| "The Secrets We Keep" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2002 13:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG!!! This story is so sad. I actually cried this chapter cause it's so sad. I hope Vegeta and Bulma get together soon. Cause at the moment Bulma doesn't have anythig to help her live. |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: July 02, 2002 11:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Poor Bulma, all these terrible things that you do to her, I hope she gets happy in the end. I like it a lot, and I can't wait til you update. Speaking of updating, are you ever going to update? I so, can you let me know. |
Reviewed By: Masume On: May 07, 2002 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good! It's such a different take on everything. So many brilliant insights of Bulma's reactions to all that has happened... I love it! I just hope that everything turns out all right for Bulma. Curse Vegeta for hurting her like that! Where's Goku to beat his ass into submission when you need him?
Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Lee_chan On: April 16, 2002 18:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG THAT WAS A REALLY GOOD STORY! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE FINISH IT AND SEND ME THE FINISHED CHAPTERS!! LOL I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!
THAT STORY WAS AWSOME!!!! |
Reviewed By: Lee_chan On: April 16, 2002 18:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG THAT WAS A REALLY GOOD STORY! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE FINISH IT AND SEND ME THE FINISHED CHAPTERS!! LOL I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!
THAT STORY WAS AWSOME!!!! |
Reviewed By: cosmicvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2002 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This isn't a flame, but whats up with the AooA or whatever they were? Sorry just a bit cunfused this chapter. |
Reviewed By: kandi On: February 23, 2002 05:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was truly the most touching story I have every read. It's so sad, but that whats makes it the great story it is. Your are doing an excellent job. Keep up the good work, and please write more chapters. I am really looking forward!! |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear On: December 31, 2001 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, poor Bulma & Celeste. But now she has Vegeta on her side now so things have to get better. You've done a good job. This piece of work is just one of the few that can actually bring tears to someones eyes (even mine). I hope B & V try to have a baby in the upcoming chapters ahead. |
