| "Siren" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: keep it up!
Reviewed By: LaLa13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 16:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, great fanfic! Keep up the good work! Can't wait to see more, cuz I'm totally obsessed with sirens.
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Title: very good
Reviewed By: LaLa13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 15:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very good idea. I like the last line, 'How could he try to hurt me?' You might try forming paragraphs instead of one huge block of text. It is very hard to read, and it doesn't look very good. But your plot is awesome. Keep up the good work.
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