| "PLAYING WITH THE DEVIL" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: a good potential story
Reviewed By: Fuyuna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 07:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is a good story, hope you will continue it soon. But I wonder, what's the relation between Himura with Shishio and Yumi?
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Reviewed By: Ecchi-Anbu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 20:30 CST
Comment/Review:
I have to honest with ya... "intoned"? Come on now, no body wants to read about "intoned" sex, put the god damn explicit goods up on here! Fanfiction.net is also know as "the pit", what does that tell you? Look, I love the fic so far but the concept isn't even all that original, but hey ya write well enough and with sex "written in" you'd be even more liked. As sad as that may sound to some. Anyways, I have only one issue to address with you... "piss you"? "Flick you"? the fuck is this?!??!
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: daRk_HeARt_oF_tHe_NiGht [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 16:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter even better than before, but can you write more? If you can, thank you.
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: MEGASUPER [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 03:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER!THE STORY IS GETTING MORE AND MORE INTERESTING!PLEASE UPDATE SOON!GOOD LUCK
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Reviewed By: chelisha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 21:45 CST
Comment/Review:
I can't wait to read more, i would hav rated it, but teo chapters is not enough to rate it upon, keep it up, i want to read the rest!!! ^^
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Title: none
Reviewed By: daRk_HeARt_oF_tHe_NiGht [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 15:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this! Keep writing! Please!!!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: MEGASUPER [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 07:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY!THE CHAPTER IS VERY GOOD!HOPE YOU WILL UPDATE SOON!THE STORY IS GREAT!I HAVE READ IT ON FANFICTION.NET!AND IT WAS ONE OF MY FAVORITES!UPDATE SOON!CANT WAIT
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