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| "Evil Kasumi Returns" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Nikisha On: July 07, 2006 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi I really like this story. I can't ait until ch 10 is posted. Please continue this until the end. It is a great story as it would be a shame for it to go unfinished. So,please finish this story. I have one thing I would like to ask. With Ranma and Kasumi going at it like rabbits at first without protection. Will I be reading in later chapters that Kasumi has got a bun in oven as a result? The answer is up to you. I really hope they get married. Please say they get married. It will be the perfect semi-close ending. For when or if Kasumi is pregnant and gives birth to whatever baby(s) there is to be the perfect ending. This is just food for thought. Use it if you like. Just please hurry with a new chapter soon. I wish you luck with writing this story. bye!
| Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I understand and sympathise with you. Anyhow reveiw time. Damn that was a wild and interesting ride. Holy shit that fiht was INTENSE for Kasumi. I am glad it worked out for this 'new' family. BUT I think Kasumi would be safer brteaking away from the tendos and shacking up in another part of japan with Ranma Colonge and Xian-Pu. Hell they got the makings of their own clan right there! Looking forward to seeing what develops And I hope Kas-chan goives her old family a verbal toungelashing ESPECIALLY Akane Nabiki Genma and others....
| Reviewed By: Mark78 On: March 27, 2005 12:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have always enjoyed Ranma+Kasumi stories, both characters compliment eachother very well. This story, if you actually finish it, will be one of my favorites. However, it seen as if Kasumi is taking care of all Ranma's problem. Nothing wrong with that, but as I read the story I noticed that Ranma started to become a seconday character. Hopefully he will have a larger role to play in future updates. Well done, and keep writting ^_^
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