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Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 21:18 CDT
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very funny :)so far it shows a lot of promise. i hope you have fun writing this, because it looks like you are. and remember something. no matter how much people like your story never rush yourself. you'll wind up finding yourself distancing yourself from you story. but good luvk and great job :)
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 17:14 CDT
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i'm sorry that chap.3 is so short yuo may come at me with pitch forks.. it seemed a lot longer in word pad....-.-U sry......
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 16:47 CDT
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i like my poem i just went back to read it an it's ok!
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Title: panda_ears-> shampoo
Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 16:40 CDT
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are u shampoo?^quote^grammar either no there or in the wrong place^end quote^??? a hahah zoe zoe ......do you have muliple personalitys?lol
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 16:37 CDT
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wow thanks (wipes at eyes *seriously*) i actually wrote down a poem that came to me cause i had read i kikyo fic and based the story on that in about 2 hours but thanks really and i do like your fics
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Title: You've worked hard.
Reviewed By: Terra MB [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 22:27 CDT
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I can tell you've worked very hard on this fic. *^_^* it's worth all that work to. I love the story and the plot AND the way you put it all together. please contienue your wonderful story ok? *^_^* I can't do poem's as good as you ether. -_-U I kinda look up to you, you know? don't give up cuz you really do have alot of talent. *^_^* just wright what you want to wright. ok? *^_^* well... SEE YOU SOON!!!!!!!! *^_^* JA-NE!!!!!!!!!*^_~*
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Title: GOOD JOB!!! *^_^*
Reviewed By: Terra MB [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your doing great!!!!!!! please keep it up! *^_^* to tell you the truth, I'm not a fan of Kikyo's. but this is very good compeared to what I've read so far. *^_^* good job!!!!!! *^_^* PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!! *^_^* JA-NE!!!!!!!!*^_~*
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 15:02 CDT
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charm i'm reading wispers inthe night come over and read it when you finnish this one....
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 15:00 CDT
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teera i read your fics!!
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 15:00 CDT
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ok i will continue it*sniff sniff* you really like it?!
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Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 20:54 CDT
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well it was interesting. a little OOC but not that bad. you should have someone beta your fics to check for those things. but not bad, story has a lot of potential if you choose to continue it further.
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Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 20:54 CDT
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well it was interesting. a little OOC but not that bad. you should have someone beta your fics to check for those things. but not bad, story has a lot of potential if you choose to continue it further.
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Title: LOVE IT!!
Reviewed By: Terra MB [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think it's that bad. *^_^* I don't really find anything wrong with it. If you like it that's all that matters. so I wouldn't worry about it. on the plus side, I love it! *^_^* if this is something you like to do, then do it. Hope you make some more! JA-NE!!!!!!!!!! *^_~*
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Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 22:42 CDT
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hey are you shampoo or something? **
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: ookami san the animelover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 22:40 CDT
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zoe zoe!????????????? whahahahahahahah your name is panda ears? kawaii i love!!!!!!!!!!!!!! summer!!!!!!!!!!! call this one panda- san and you know my spelling and grammar sucks(capitalize)bye ........*watcing fly*
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