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| "Tainted Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: VampiricEssence [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 14:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Potiental. Though, you really might want to proof read, and spell/grammar check. You are confusing your words, and leaving off letters that would change the tense. Also, you need to stick to one verb tense, because I noticed you switched from past to present tense once or twice. Stay in one tense, dear. Other then that, keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: Bluelilly1928 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this please con't and add more to it
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