| "A New Disaster" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: Love it
Reviewed By: Niwatari On: August 30, 2006 11:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awh... completely adicted to your writing ^^ Unfortunatly you havent continued this story since may... Please write more soon! Really looking forward to it, Mata!
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Title: Pretear
Reviewed By: Takako_sasame On: August 10, 2006 14:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your fanfic. The only thing that drives me crazy is the way you spell hayate's name. But other then that I loved it.
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Title: Pretear
Reviewed By: HimenoAwayuki On: March 10, 2006 17:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So u finally updated! Interesting story, but some of the stuff u had them saying, I just couldn't picture it. It seemed out of personality. Whatever... TTYL!
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Title: comment
Reviewed By: sangre [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2006 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i rated it high for i really like the story but please continue the story as soon as possible i cant wait to read the next chapter and i am so curious on what will happen so please continue it as soon as possible please please i beg you....
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Reviewed By: Sayaoran On: February 19, 2006 23:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to stop by, and tell you I rather enjoy your fanfiction, I look forward to the next chapter. -Sayaoran-
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Title: Pretear
Reviewed By: Chyna On: August 27, 2005 17:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was really great because I am just in love with the pretear and the story line was amazing. Thanks for writing it, it was a great read
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Title: Pretear
Reviewed By: HimenoAwayuki On: August 26, 2005 09:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, ur spelling in this on, at least getting the right word, wasn't ur best. And WOULD U STOP PUTTING WORDS IN MY MOUTH!!!!! At the end I have never said any of that, and I am Himeno... unless ur talking about talking to a cartoon.... then I'm a little worried. But it was good, as long as u replaced the wrong word w/ the right. TTYL~~ Himeno
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Title: Pretear
Reviewed By: HimenoAwayuki On: July 23, 2005 15:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yeah, I kinda forgot to write some stuff....HEY LOOK!!!!! Someone else has read it too!!!!!!!!! I'm not the only recent commentor!!!!!!!!!! What was up with the preate spelling???? And if ur telling me that is how its spelled, where did u find it????? U tend to spell things funky. Yeah I think thats all.... TTYL
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Title: Pretear
Reviewed By: HimenoAwayuki On: July 23, 2005 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, so some stuff I didn't quite get on this one. It seemed a bit confusing... And don't ask me what parts later on because I'm not going to reread the whole thing to tell u!!!!!! And I semi remember saying the short thing, but did u make the rest of it up???? Like the little arguement???? Those r usually fun when it really is both of us. Anyway, pretty good, I could have sworn u made at least one spelling mistake, but I don't feel like double checking. TTYL~~
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Reviewed By: Dreamgirllogan On: July 12, 2005 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting story. i hope that you can write the next chapter soon ... i am dying to know what happens next! keep up the good work!
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Title: Pretear
Reviewed By: HimenoAwayuki On: June 16, 2005 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
So I thought it was interesting. And u r so corrected... U do have a twisted imagination!!!! JK. Keep going on the story, it's getting pretty good. ~TTYL~
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Reviewed By: bobbyneko On: June 13, 2005 09:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is pretty cool. cant wait for next chappy! ^-^
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Title: Pretear
Reviewed By: HimenoAwayuki On: May 05, 2005 19:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Would u update already???????
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Title: Pretear
Reviewed By: HimenoAwayuki On: April 01, 2005 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting story so far. It doesn't quite add up everything, but for a start its pretty good. But u have GOT to work on your spelling. JK, I'm really not sure how ur spelling went, but I figured for old times sake, why not make fun of your spelling? TTYL
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