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| "Origins" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] | Reviewed By: catgirl26 (not signed in) On: January 04, 2009 18:23 CST
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So I read this whole story pretty much in one sitting. I took a break around chapter 20 or so, to eat some food, and then I sat my ass down and read the rest. I only wish I'd been following this as you were writing it, because I guarantee you, I would have been on the edge of my seat between every update. Lovely story, wonderfully gripping, and I have to say, when I first started reading I was thinking "Logan and Remy? WTF?" and now I don't think I'll ever be able to view any of their cannon interactions without reading slash into it. :D Great work. I'm very glad you decided to finish this story and share it with the rest of us.
| Reviewed By: Lhirek [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2009 00:10 CST
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Thank you, love, for sharing this extraordinary piece of work with us. I stumbled across this story back in 2007, and I can remember reading it over and over again, committing every line to memory. I can also remember feeling an incredible sense of loss as the story seemed to end abruptly, with no apparent ending in site. Truth be told, I had stopped checking back to see if you would ever continue. I don't think words could accurately describe the pure elation I felt when I saw those final three chapters today. I'm still in a bit of shock, honestly. *sighs heavily* I cried, hun, reading through the final chapter. I wanted to.. somehow ease the emotional pain Remy is/was feeling. It was so real. So.. tragic. There are many other things I'd like to talk about as well, many other aspects of this story I would like to comment on, but I fear that at times like this, times when I'm so emotional over something, my thoughts are typically incoherent and I tend to ramble. Suffice it to say, your writing has stolen my heart. In my humble opinion, this is the best piece of fanfiction I have ever read. Once again, thank you for sharing this with us.
| Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2008 21:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! *wipes tears away* That was excellent!! I'm so glad you came back and finished it! I truly enjoyed reading this story, keep up the excellent writing!!
| Title: Oh, wow. Just.. wow!
Reviewed By: Heaven On: April 07, 2008 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My love, you are one fantastic writer. This story has moved me in a way that no other form of fiction has, and I am now at a loss for intelligent words. I'd like to take the time to sit and break down each chapter, to give you a thorough review of how much -and why- I enjoyed each and every chapter, but I fear there may not be enough time or space, not to mention my incessant rambling may irritate you, and I'd rather not have that. But you have an incredible talent, and I'm just in awe. && I love the idea of Logan being Remy's.. rock? protector? lover? Yes, I just absolutely love it. And your portrayal of Remy was spot-on perfect, dear. You are my new writing role-model.
| Reviewed By: aidan bard [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 01:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, I'm going to review before I read the full story. I followed this for a while then I lost the link so firstly...nice to see you have kept up with it. And secondly...it's great that ppl are still active in the x-men fandom. And I do like the story...I've read upto chapter 12 so far and going to read the rest. :)
| Reviewed By: avoria [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 04:06 CDT
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Your story is great, but your spelling is horrendous, though I do remember that you don't really know French. "Alors" means "so", and "what is that" is spelled "Qu'est_ce que c'est"... I have a genetic problem with automatically correcting everyone, so don't feel bad or insulted or anything...
| Title: What? No!
Reviewed By: Aots On: March 06, 2007 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NUUUUUUU~! I can't believe there's no more chapters! I am so in to this story it's kind of sad. There's a wide range of emotions running through me. On one hand, I feel sorry for Logan and Remy- cause they just can't have a "normal" relationship; and on the other hand, I'm happy and (sadly) excited over the progress the two are making (though Remy is still being raped and abused). And then there's that third hand, that shouldn't be there during Remy's anguish going "...that's kind of hot." ....Anyway >.> Please update soon! The suspence is killing me! (not really but I mean it as a figure of speech)
| Reviewed By: Pansy Buddy On: January 21, 2007 21:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying this fic..I read all 27 chapters in one go and it's now *looks at clock* 3am. xD As you can see...I think I'm addicted. Keep the good work up! Looking forwards to see you post up some new chapters.
| Title: Whoa!
Reviewed By: Navi99 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 13:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are an absolutely amazing writer! Very imaginative and well-portrayed characters. I can totally hear Remy's speech; you pulled him off really well! This is the first Logan/Remy fic I've read and already I'm addicted to the pairing ^_^ Awesome job
| Reviewed By: Whatwhatnow [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 16:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A wonderful chapter! I was very excited to see it was updated and that you decided to continue it. *bows* Thank you, and I can't wait to read more!
| Reviewed By: Whatwhatnow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wanted to drop you a review ^^. I really love this story and your approach on it. I would love to read more, so I hope you continue ^^
| Reviewed By: Shin Yuy On: October 16, 2006 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just thought I would drop a line and say I have been reading all of your works all day and I love every bit of them! This story most of all! I do wish you would write some more or hopefuly I can find where more of your works are. I love the way you portray the characters and Gambit and Logan are written perfectly for your universe. Thank you so much for the wonderful work! -xoxo SY
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