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| "Openings" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: hot hot hot
Reviewed By: Alaskanbeauty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 14:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have not read anything so hot in quite awhile, Had to stop and go put gold water on my face so many times. The passion and love between these two makes them my fav pairing. These two belong together and your story just showed how much they belong together. I truly hope you write more please as you do it so well. Whew..pant, pant pant...sorry need to go get more cold water :O}
| Reviewed By: grissom500 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 10:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing fic. You allow the individual personalities of 'kai and jo to shine through the smut (though that's good too) your writing is not boring, and you know how to SPELL *bows* you are a god on this site. And we all know how hot youkai Hakkai is *purs* Now if only we could get "Crimson and Clover" back... *smiles* a fan, as always, Yuki
| Reviewed By: Kiba-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 18:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eee! Better than I expected!! God, I love Gojyo/Hakkai. ^^ And Hakkai/Gojyo too, of course. Minekura gives us this tantalizing bit of Gojyo and Hakkai's life together, and when I finsihed reading, I was just dying to know more. And this is exactly what I wanted! The characters are completely perfect, the diologue flows so smoothly, and of course, the smut is fabulous and creative. Your writing style is beautiful as well; very natural. I find myself constantly reusing words and sentence patterns, and you've managed to make every syllable of this lovely story completely unique. You really must write more Saiyuki fiction. I really love your Hakkai... I'm rather entranced with Hakkai's demon half, and I LOVE stories where that's mixed in with his sexual side. It would so be like Gojyo to take the ear cuffs off... Well, I'm getting close to my limit here, so I want to thank you again for the scanlations!!!! I'm so glad I found you and this story. And of course, I must beg you to write more Saiyuki fan fiction... I'm off to search your gallery for more....
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