Reviewed By: Quickleaf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 10:21 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: This is one of the first takes on this story that I have read where the future is chanced for us. Good job on that, plus I liked the way you made Raven's personality, more of a lost little girl thing. Very good and I promise I won't yell about your other story ;).
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