| "My Feared Lover" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 21:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
this seems cool so far. i'm interested in where you're going with this. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Penthesileia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 14:53 CDT
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THIS STORY IS SO COOL!!!!!! I love how Kagome's this kick ass hunter and is after the thing that killed her father. Sango's really cool to. Hey, Kagome is going to beat Inuyasha up right? Please? Do it at least once. I just think that would be really funny.
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Reviewed By: sexkitten On: April 10, 2005 17:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo this is good if i could i'd give u more than 10! please write more!
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Reviewed By: Dark Miko89 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 02:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW 0.o' CCCRRREEEEEEPPPPYY. im realy likin this fic so you got to update real soon OTAY!! P.S. i wish i could be InuYashas queen!!!!!
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Reviewed By: fireflywritter On: March 29, 2005 23:53 CST
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Hurry up and update the next chapter! Even though its only been a day. Lol.
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Reviewed By: sublimetrickster [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 09:16 CST
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Looks interesting, I like it so far and look forward to the next chapter. Just watch you grammar and tenses.
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Reviewed By: fireflywritter On: March 28, 2005 20:00 CST
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Cool...
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Reviewed By: black_talisman13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 13:17 CST
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this is a great chapter and i can't wait to know how it will continue... as long as you won't make kagome too innocent (which she doesn't seem at all to be, at this moment, but, hey, you see a lot of things out there. first make her strong, and then as weak and innocent as a baby. hate those stories!!), this could be a very interesting and good story... and I trust you to make a great work! continue!
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Reviewed By: mely On: March 27, 2005 00:33 CST
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So far it looks like your story is off on a great start. You could go many directions with the way you set it up. Looking forward to your next chapter. Great job.
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