| "With You" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: frederickfox [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2009 09:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this piece enough to finish it. I wasn't completely into the story because of all the spelling errors and the tense usage. A lot of tenses were wrong. for example the first part said knew instead of know. Not the best work but also not the worst.
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Reviewed By: jiggersnacker On: June 08, 2005 02:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
you mispelt moan.....alot...in fact the one time you did spell it right i'm guessing this was an accident, but hey i love your story to death yuffie vinny are soooooooooooooooo perfect together!!!! yayness!
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