| "Shattered Glass" Reviews/Comments [ 106 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lil Orphan Annie On: September 02, 2005 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ack! Update soon, please! You're story's so cute and it's very well written. ^_^ keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: math-nerd On: August 12, 2005 01:45 CDT
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Hi! Your friend from the math underworld! Math=COOL Oh and all girls intrested in math, science, engneering, or technolgy, KUTOS! That is so cool because girls can do those things to! YES WE CAN! And a big thanks to XxDemonic_PrincessxX because your story is so cool. (incase you haven't guessed i'm a girl w/ big problems with steriotipes
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Reviewed By: math-nerd On: August 10, 2005 02:02 CDT
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Hi! Ummmm...mmm...mmm...Ok to the POINT i love this story! (raises both arms and dose vitorysymbol) Realises entire library staring & librarian glareing. Nervous laughter...haha..ha. The moral of this story is that some humans (ie me) are obsesed with good writing. (all: -_-;;;) (me:WHAT!) (all:-_-***)
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Reviewed By: math-nerd On: August 07, 2005 01:21 CDT
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I've been away at a math camp (yay!) the food however was well pritymuch just potatoes you know if you didn't finish the tater tots that morning lunch looked suspicusly like cut tater tots and doner was mashed potateose...Ahem well thats enough of THAT... You left us with a clif hanger (tear tear) all others watching me now-_-; soooo when will you give the conclution??Well...(impaishet taping) all others -_-;;;;;;;;;;
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Title: Shattered Glass
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 16:18 CDT
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This is going great so far...The beginning of the chapter was kind of weird; I thought I had read it like 2 chapters back already. For the e-mail, no I don't mind. I actually think it's really sweet of the authors to reply back to their reviewers every now and then. As for the one-shots, type up the longer one first. Then if you have a little bit of time, you could post the next one as well^^.
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Reviewed By: evnrejfnvjnfjnvoresn On: July 09, 2005 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i vote on the 2nd one i love an good romance my nickname is sango and i hope you put the 2nd one on the fanfic site great story but get the chappies 2kb longer thanks, Sango p.s inuyasha rox
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Reviewed By: born2dance On: July 08, 2005 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm really enjoying this fafic and i hope you update soon. i told some friends about this fic and they are enjoying it too.
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova(>.> nope not logged in.....) On: July 08, 2005 09:26 CDT
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hmmm you could just type them both up together.. ^^ (now back to the review) great chappy. can't wait till you update..which i hope is soon. ja ne, Zirra
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Title: LOVE IT!!!!
Reviewed By: Dancing_One [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE your story. Rin should be Kagome's age. She is funner to write that way and well I wanna see how interesting you could make it. Please update A.S.A.P.
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Title: Sooooooooo Gooooood!!
Reviewed By: InuandKagforev On: July 05, 2005 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did sooooo goooood!! i love it so much although u did have spelling problems but that does not mater to much!! plz update if u ever write another story ok?!?! GOOOOOOOOD STORRY!! ~InuandKagforev~ P.S- U R SO COOOOOOOOOL!! ^_^ i love your work!!!
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Title: shattered glass
Reviewed By: ryan foster Lucas On: July 05, 2005 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you need to hurry we all love shatered glass and you should make rin a child and don't have her talk or play with kagoma in the tv shows kagoma does not even say or play or help rin inany way i promise!!!!!!!!!
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Title: FF
Reviewed By: gimpys still kicken On: July 03, 2005 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to make Rin as old as Kagome and the others. great storry keep writing.
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Title: shattered glass
Reviewed By: dark miko On: July 02, 2005 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you should make rin the same age as kagome
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Reviewed By: Fashioncat On: July 02, 2005 00:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE your story so far... Please oh PLEASE leave Rin as a little girl... she's so cute! You could bring Kagura into the story and make her Sesshomaru's mate and have either Shippo or Kohaku Rin's friend and future-mate...hmmm....I thought Jaken was Sess's slave though?....oh well. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: *Inuluvher151* On: July 01, 2005 14:32 CDT
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hey this is a really great story can't wait until you update
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