| "Shattered Glass" Reviews/Comments [ 106 ] |
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Title: Shattered Glass
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 14:09 CDT
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Let's make Rin Sesshomaru's mate, everybody. Older Rin is a lot funner than smaller Rin (to write about). The update was small, but at least we got one. I haven't gotten any update notices in my inbox from anyone other than you and one more person on my 'favorites' list in about a month. My list has about fifteen people on it....-.-
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 13:55 CDT
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hmm..either idea seems good to me..and if she was kags and sango's age they could have lots of fun together...but if she was younger, you could get kohaku into the story as her friend. just thinking outloud here..NEways. update asap, please. Ja ne, Zirra
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Title: i know
Reviewed By: Arina On: June 30, 2005 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
um....make rin big rin yup yup!!! update please!!!~Arina
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Title: Shattered Glass
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story seems to be moving very quickly...It's good, of course; all you're stories are fantasic. You still have a few errors in Shattered Glass and Breaking the Habit. I doubt many people have noticed them though, since they're not that obvious.It's good though. I have one question: Are there going to be any hentai scenes in any of your stories?^^
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Reviewed By: AV On: June 19, 2005 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow love this fic please keep updating i really like this concept and romance please update soon i will check this fic daily keep up the great work im really enjoying it so far cant wait for more!!!!!
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Reviewed By: math-nerd On: June 19, 2005 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Seshy-sama! Hes going to met Rin. am I right? eee!Ok i'll calm down...No I wont! Can't wait for the next update. EEEE!
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Reviewed By: animedorkette [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chappie!! yay!! shessy made an apearence !!! shessy a fling child....kag and inu scen , how kiawi!!!!
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Reviewed By: jsusgirl883 On: June 19, 2005 09:47 CDT
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Very interesting. I love this story. But personally, I think that's a stupid reason to get a slave. But that's just me. And I'm against slavery anyway. I hope you update soon. Will you repost this story on ff.net? I can't wait for the surprise. Guess I'm gonna have to wait now, right? Like I said, I hope you update soon. Buh-bye!
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Title: Adorable
Reviewed By: Linwé On: June 19, 2005 03:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutly adorable the last chapter and so funny, so is sess gunna buy Rin or something then there all there, lol buhbye
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Title: cute
Reviewed By: kagome182005 (not signed in yet) On: June 19, 2005 02:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can you update more frequintly? I hope I spelled that right....I think I did....I hope so.....Good chappie.............
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Title: shattered glass
Reviewed By: ryan foster Lucas On: June 17, 2005 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was great i read capters1-9 and i was mad that you did not work on cahpters 10-like um20 yeah 10-20 and i hope you start working on them soon becuse i am your biggest fan ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! your asome
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Reviewed By: InuGrrrl On: June 16, 2005 08:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I love this story so far....
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Title: cute!!
Reviewed By: kagome182005 (not signed in yet) On: June 16, 2005 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so sweet!! UPDATE NOW OR FEEL MY WRATH!! *crawls into the corner and starts laughing again* Suddenly men fressed in black suits come around her. "Oh hi you guys!! Do I get to go to that place again?" *men places a straight jacket on me* "Thanks for the jacket!! It makes me hug myself."
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Reviewed By: LoveangelLi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 22:21 CDT
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AWWW This story is SO cute!!! I love it and I RAELY like InuYasha stories!!! This story ROCKS!! Please update soon!1 Much love to ya loveangelLi flying away
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Reviewed By: math-nerd On: June 15, 2005 21:37 CDT
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I think the story is SO cool when do you think you'll update. (more extensive and iratic puppy dog eyes) Can't wait! (sorry about sp)
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