Reviewed By: PinkySnake On: April 18, 2005 13:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're a mediocre writer and I think it's because you're so thematically predictable and repetitive. Good writing, but you'll never grow unless you expand...and get away from the stuff you write over and over again...especially the creepy stuff >< Which is probably why you don't have many reviews, incest is great taboo...but a very uncomfortable subject, and offensive for those who don't have experience. Continue growing a little more and I'll continue reading. As far as content you have lots of grammar and spelling errors and a whole bunch of fragments, consider an editor. Otherwise you're imagination is okay.
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