Reviewed By: Ray-ge-chaos-seven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aryll and Orca's dialogue was lacking in the scene at the top of the hill before Aryll is captured. I really enjoyed the way it was written, it made it funnier and was fairly original. A good story and I think I;d like to read more. Keep up the good work.
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