| "Kagome's new pet" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: gale89 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 16:56 EDT
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when are you going to update?? ::whines:: i wanna read the next chapter. i've already read these like a million times. atleast put up a note explaining why you havent written. something. please.
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Title: pls update
Reviewed By: gale89 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 12:26 EDT
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hey ::poke poke:: hey you?! why havent you updated? hey HEY!! im talken to you! why havent you updated? ::gets down on knees and begs:: pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls update soon for the love of god update! ::beaks down crying::
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Title: update
Reviewed By: gale89 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 12:43 EDT
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pls psl psl pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls update soon. i'm gonna die if you dont this is a really good fic and i'll hunt down and kill anyone who says any different. pls pls pls pls pls pls pls update soon for the love (or not) of god!!!! pls i'm beging you.
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas lover 2 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 14:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry sorry sorry so sorry about not reviewing sooner. i'v been busy but i'm back now and i must say great and your lemon was i must say it was more like a lime but good better than mine and i understand how you are when you write a lemon i'm ( sniff) the same way i just blush then get...a lot of showers ¬_¬ yeah thats it. anyway ^-^ i hope you update soon (squeals) i cant wait for the next update you grew up so fast ( sniff ) its so good so you better finish this story and don't end it short please update soon.
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Title: AWSOME!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: gale89 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 19:25 EDT
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i loved it you have to update soon pls!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: tigeryasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 17:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very much enjoyed. Have to admit, do think the chaps are a little short; could use more fleshing out. Please do continue; love the flashbacks w/ Kikyo to show the difference between her & Kagome.
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Reviewed By: Simply a Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 02:09 EDT
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Goody now I have two places to go and read this. And you have trouble writing a lemon? It's okay I do to...and I have a reputation for them...groans... Anyway if this helps and you find yourself having trouble doing it. Just push yourself away and calm down or play music as you type it. Doing lemons is not easy especially if you let it come from your heart, it affects you and your fans much stronger. Anything to distract is helpful...but anyhow update soon dang it
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 19:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was just wow keep up the good work and update again soon please? but why are your chapters so short? i dont mind but just curious! keep up the good work you have made me very very curious and you've left me hangin update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: The Ying and Yang Twins [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 18:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yang: I like your writing style a lot...It's a fun story and keep up the good work!
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Title: I Love this story
Reviewed By: Inuluvher151 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 16:31 EDT
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Hey I thought this was a really good chapter keep up the good work and update soon PLEASE!!!! I wanna find out what happends next thanks Inuluvher151 P.S. try to make the chapters a little longer
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Title: Kagome's New Pet - Chapter 006
Reviewed By: DemonicTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 21:46 EDT
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Great chapter I really enjoyed it. don't worry about the lemon it will just come to you in the end *yawns* sheehs stay up to late is not a good thing.. Ramble isn't ever *sweat drops* Er.. sorry well anyways like a said good story and Updat soon Please *Puppy eyes*
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Reviewed By: Stratas [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 21:16 EDT
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Sorry about not reviewing sooner. Another good chapter, there was a few grammar mistakes, though nothing major. Update soon, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 20:33 EDT
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I still love this story, please write more! I think this chapter was good, dont feel bad about it!
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Title: Kagome's new pey
Reviewed By: DemonicTenshi84 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 16:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really ejoyed the chapter ^_^ update soon please
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Reviewed By: themuse [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 03:02 EDT
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Hello. You have asked for truthful reviews, so I will try to provide such. Your premise and story line thus far is excellent. The characterizations you have going are consistant, and you seem to be one of the few authors that actually uses her spellcheck, although you might want to consider getting an editor to correct the grammar errors. The places that I think you could improve would be along the lines of style. There's a general rule when writing; "Show, don't tell". Rather than just explaining to the audience the rules and setting of your story, show them to us through character conversations, inner monologues, or character actions. If that seems too hard, you could always write a 'preface' to your fic explaining the setting and ideas that people need to understand. You want to avoid spending time explaining things to the audience in the middle of the story as much as possible. Other than that? The fic is great thus far, and I look forward to your next chapter.
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