| "Gone Swimmin'" Reviews/Comments [ 63 ] |
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Reviewed By: shagschain *not logged in* On: April 02, 2005 11:22 PST
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love it. and it's great that despite the general hentainess as the point of it all, it actually had a good set up and good writing.
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Reviewed By: Sara R. On: April 01, 2005 20:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it:) I think you should you write another "chapter" on the aftermath when they have to go back to the village. If not, still, it is one of the best stories/lemons out there that I've read so far!!!!!
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Title: i liked it
Reviewed By: Lady_Hanyou On: April 01, 2005 13:27 PST
Comment/Review:
i dunno i thought it was cute
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Reviewed By: AmonLover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 11:42 PST
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I Absolutely Love this Story takes me back to the good old days when OneShot Lemon where still well written Great Job!!!!
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Reviewed By: Blackat On: March 30, 2005 08:56 PST
Comment/Review:
Wonderful please go on
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 21:00 PST
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this is great but u should continue it, see how miroku and songo and especially shippou react when they find out about kags and inu, that would be great... Zirra
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Reviewed By: Tyvani [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 19:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely loved this! It's being printed (retaining credit, of course. former English/Writing major and currently studying to become a librarian: I'm incapable of doing otherwise) and added to my file of fanfics I refuse to risk losing. That makes this among the top dozen of all the fanfics I've read. Again, excellent job!
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Reviewed By: mmf On: March 29, 2005 12:18 PST
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pant..pant..wow! that was amazing! I am very impressed. Im still trying to catch my breath. I have read a lot of fics but this one has to be one of my new favs.
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Reviewed By: mmf On: March 29, 2005 12:16 PST
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pant..pant..wow! that was amazing! I am very impressed. Im still trying to catch my breath. I have read a lot of fics but this one has to be one of my new favs.
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 (not signed in) On: March 29, 2005 08:09 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope this is only the first chapter of many lemony chapters to come! This was really well written, and I could see it going down like that too. Great story, and I can't wait to see more. It rocked!
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 20:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was grest. There was a part in this story that got me laughing (quietly since my mother is sleeping next to my room) that I was choking. You should write a sequel to this. As I said before, this story is great! Two thumbs up!!!
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Reviewed By: WHM Yayo On: March 28, 2005 18:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quickening, I may never get tired of your work. But you really should update Once Upon A Snowstorm. It's the reason I love MirKag.
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Reviewed By: PZB On: March 28, 2005 16:54 PST
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Hee heee....ahh yes, I do think that quite justified the piece. :D Can't say I ever once thought of that as I did that piece, but I'm not complaining. :D Wonderful, darlin'. Worth the wait.
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Reviewed By: windex On: March 28, 2005 16:25 PST
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Great story but you neeed to stop repeating words.
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Reviewed By: WiccanMethuselah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 15:19 PST
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What a wonderful lemon!!! I truly enjoyed this ... the action leading up to the lemon, the descriptive phrases, characters actually IN character; it was terrific!!! Thanks for a little lift to the afternoon! :-D
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