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Reviewed By: qulysawndre [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2015 01:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God that's some nostalgia. It was my favorite story almost ten
years ago when I read fanfiction and it's still a favorite now.
Thanks for keeping it up for so long.
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Reviewed By: chaotic_kimmy On: September 24, 2009 13:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading a lot of inuyasha fiction lately. This is the best and most non-cliché one I have seen. I am impressed. And only one grammatical error. Can't remember where.
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Reviewed By: Breezie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2009 13:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"WOW"!!!! I'm speechless.......
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Reviewed By: SelfInducedHell On: March 14, 2009 20:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet Mother of Jesus. That. Was. Hot. Like, major hot. Like, so hot I nearly fainted, lol. But damn, you know how to write a lemon. And you know your story was good when I decide to take the time to review it (coming from a reader who forgets to review sometimes, hehe). But, honestly, this is worth a billion reviews. No jokes.
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: Eiko007 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2008 19:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!!!!!!!!!!! This was great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I felt a little worriend when Kagome "help" inuyasha and he hadn't do anything to "help" her... and the page seems to be ending... but no!!! there was a lot more!!! It was just wonferful!!! This fic was cute... was sweet... had a little drama... and hentai and all that a fic needs!!! really!!! I really love this fic!!! you write great... well good luck and happy new year xD... byebye
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Reviewed By: soraryu On: August 24, 2008 16:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fic! I read it linked through ff.net. Great writing, I love the deeetailed description of Inuyasha, naked, sleeping under the tree. Good job keeping the characters in character. You have a great talent for the pacing! Flirtatious Inuyasha is so sexy. A very, very tasteful lemon. Thanks for a beautiful story, one of my all-time favorites, and a great read!!!
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2008 15:38 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was entertaining.... lol.... i could actually really see that happening between them like that... lol.... except kago would probably be a little more naive about the whole thing... but great job no less!!!!
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Reviewed By: Mrs. Squarepants On: March 26, 2008 23:21 PDT
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WOOH. Damn, girl. You sure know how to write a lemon. Great job. I've always loved flirtatious Inuyasha. And I loved the smut.
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Title: gone swimming
Reviewed By: auronblaze On: December 06, 2007 12:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only thing that this story is missing is sequels and more arguments between inuyasha and kagome. And maybe some Competition / or a fight inuyasha and kouga over kagome. Other then that this was my favrite story yet. Hope you have the next chapter done soon. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!
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Title: AMAZING
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 21:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that was amazing. I couldn't stop reading. I really felt like I was watching an episode (one that would air on HBO!) WOW. that was...words just can't really say it. And what do you mean it had no plot? That was a GREAT Plot!!!! Wonderful work, just superb, absolutely terrific. Keep it up. You are now on my favorite author list. I can't wait to read more works!!!!!!! GREAT!
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Reviewed By: naturesadmiral [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 03:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm at a loss for words it was outstanding, amazing, awsome, cool, perfect. It was so well written i could practicaly feel the heat and the river and what comes after,;). Please write a sequel or two, just continue please,please,please,please
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Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 00:42 PDT
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Wow...uummm...is it hot in here or what? *fans self* Come on, I know I'm not the only one! GREAT JOB WRITE MORE!!!!!
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Title: OMFG LOVED IT
Reviewed By: *^_Inuyasha_Addict_^* On: April 07, 2007 09:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Loved Your Fic Inuyasha Was So... I can't explain but bravo, 1000 out of 50 for you(thats good) You're An Awesome Writer Keep Up The Exellent Work, Please Email Me If You Do Any Other Inu/Kags fan fics at: Yashie_And_Kags_Forever@hotmail.com Thanks Sooooo Much
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Reviewed By: eeviloverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 02:47 PST
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O_o oh...just lovely. characters are spot-on...and the story itself so very, VERY hot! hee. Great job!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 16:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Most excellent and beautifully written. This was awesome.
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Reviewed By: Kagomegirl162 On: January 03, 2007 17:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was so awsome one of the best fan stories i've ever read!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 20:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it! Sequel? Please?
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Reviewed By: Blasmurf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 16:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. Good job.
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Reviewed By: Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2006 22:44 PDT
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i think i reviewed this before, under another name, another time... but i loved it so much so that when i saw it again i had to read it again and review again. this was so good. plots are over-rated anyways...
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Reviewed By: aznboi408 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 03:03 PDT
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simply AMAZING!!!
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 08:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first one-shot lemon I've eva read n love so so soooooo much! I envy kagome!! Such lucky girl. You started out so wonderful with the hot day, her spying on the sexy God...*drools* I really really envy her! Then the teasing! Dam! that wuz awesome!!! She wuz so embarrass, and when she brought Inu to his release. Ok, this fic is so wonderful, that these word I say cannot describe it! Not at all! Oh, I love the ending part. It's like she went from innocent to a nympho. I could only imagine how miro would tease them when the others do find out. Your really blessed. And I am serious when i say this. If this one shot goes in any...ANY competition, this fic would win hands down! Keep it up!!!!^.^ Ja....
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Reviewed By: avoria [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 19:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are an awesome writer, and I rally enjoyed the fanfic.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_magic_1 (NSI) On: July 17, 2006 11:04 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The best one-shots I've ever read in all my knowing that fanfictions existed! What I just said was true. This is the best! I loved the ending lol. See ya later!
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Title: Lucky Girl
Reviewed By: yanna_enoah [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 09:57 PST
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This story took my breath away. Damn Kagome, lucky girl! She's living (throught this story) and experiencing how I imagine a first time for a woman should be. Inuyasha is so oozing with sex appeal...Tsk!
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Reviewed By: yasha_21_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 17:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey i love this story so please update please i beg of u and i not beg 4 lots of so please UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Vernie B. On: September 26, 2005 21:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fic. ;)
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Reviewed By: viciousberries [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 09:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was actually the first Inuyasha fic I read that I liked. I haven't been in the fandom for very long, but you're a good writer and I enjoy your stories (yes plural but I'm too lazy to review more) a lot. It's too bad that this is a one-shot though, but I feel that way about all good one-shots. Thanks for an enjoyable read, and I hope you'll write more Inuyasha/Kagome fics soon. Luff, Suzanne.
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Reviewed By: Karulin On: August 26, 2005 01:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was very pleased by this fanfic. Not only is it well written, but it was obviously well thought out. There are many X-rated fanfics out there that just sort of throw Kagome and Inu Yasha together, without any thought at all. Your story seemed to play out how this would actually take place. They are apprehensive at first, unlike other fics where they're basically like "mmmmmok let's have sex!". Your style of writting is very good, and (of course) good grammar is always appreciated. I hope you decide to do other fanfictions. Great job!
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Reviewed By: kane shi megami [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 22:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS AWESOME! great details and descriptions of the situations. Keep up the good work you're a really talented writer.
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Reviewed By: Kiyonekage On: July 13, 2005 00:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so funny...i love how it was so awkward...it reminds me of the typical naive teenager i used to be...then of course, my friends opened my eyes to a world of perverted inuwendos(sp?)! It was great...it's the best i've read about Inu and Kagome in a long time...it truly fits them...sort of...i'm not so sure Inuyasha would follow his 'heart' per say...more like his 'other' head...but...it was good and i liked it...i'll have to read it again...it may help me work on my own writing style...Don't worry, i don't copy stories...just observe different styles of writing...your was nice and easy too follow too. From Kk
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