| "Gone Swimmin'" Reviews/Comments [ 63 ] |
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Title: Gone Swimmin'
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 12:29 PDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Reason_vs_Rhyme On: April 30, 2005 23:50 PDT
Comment/Review:
The part where they both knew the other was aroused and just stood there staring kinda reminded me of a t-shirt my friend has. The front says "I'm rad", and the back says "You're rad (let's hug)". Only with this, it would be more along the lines of "I'm hot, You're hot, (let's fuck). Er...right. Don't guys' penises (is that really the plural of penis?) shrink in cold water? Oh well... We'll just ignore that for now, yeah? Awesome one-shot... It actually wasn't totally OOC! Very good job!
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Title: Hey...
Reviewed By: Keiko89 On: April 27, 2005 05:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'Lo. This is Keiko89 from FFnet. This is a great fic, even though I've already read it. You see, I read you email about someone stealing it, and I felt sooo sorry. I had no idea. So I thought I'd review on this account and tell ya how much I enjoyed reading this one shot. I really like it. I think Kagome-Chan-Girl should ger her account deleted for stealing someone else's work. That's just wrong. Well anyway, I'm at school right now and I shouldn't be on this website....-Shifty eyes.- Ack!! Gotta go, teacher approuches!! Good luck!! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Piper On: April 26, 2005 08:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love reading your stories they are well written and always enjoyable. Your writting style and characterization is strong and clear. However, I thought you might like to know that I think some one has plagerized your story. I was on Fanfiction.net and came across a story titled "Go Fish" by Kagome-Chan-Girl. It is pretty much word for word and exact copy of this story. Sorry to be the bearer of bad news, hope it doesn't discourage you from writting again soon. Love your writting, your stories rock!
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Reviewed By: HMPrune1 On: April 19, 2005 04:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story - it's so good to see a new story from you! The characters are captured wonderfully (and of course, nice lemon)!
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love(not logged in) On: April 18, 2005 22:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was sooooooooooooooo fucking GOOD! I can't even find the right words to say right now, but what I can say is that your going right into my fav list! ^_________^
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 23:15 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...I'm more then speechless...I'm breathless, that was one very arousing one shot...I hope I see you name more often among the higher rated fics...we need some fresh blood out here in lemon land...I hope your story wins the award ;)
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: FuzzyWolf2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 21:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, Quickening amazes. I absolutely love this story, including others you've written. You're an amazing writer. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: burningChaos On: April 04, 2005 18:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked your story...there was never one point were i wanted to stop reading it and its very hard to find stories that do that...i think you should write a sequal to this story..please?
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Reviewed By: flyygirl25 On: April 04, 2005 16:56 PDT
Comment/Review:
This is a very well written one shot. Please do an update, but if not this will still be my favorite.
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Reviewed By: Sen125 On: April 04, 2005 15:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good plot substance and nice ending...^>~
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Reviewed By: Scythe (scythe16o@hotmail.com) On: April 03, 2005 16:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! This is probably the best one-shot lemon I have ever read ^^ I just wanted to say that when I was reading this, I automatically thought of a picture I found a while ago. http://www.deviantart.com/view/6959661/ Go visit if you have a spare minute or two!
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Reviewed By: shagschain *not logged in* On: April 02, 2005 11:22 PST
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love it. and it's great that despite the general hentainess as the point of it all, it actually had a good set up and good writing.
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Reviewed By: Sara R. On: April 01, 2005 20:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it:) I think you should you write another "chapter" on the aftermath when they have to go back to the village. If not, still, it is one of the best stories/lemons out there that I've read so far!!!!!
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Title: i liked it
Reviewed By: Lady_Hanyou On: April 01, 2005 13:27 PST
Comment/Review:
i dunno i thought it was cute
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