| "Gone Swimmin'" Reviews/Comments [ 63 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2006 22:44 PDT
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i think i reviewed this before, under another name, another time... but i loved it so much so that when i saw it again i had to read it again and review again. this was so good. plots are over-rated anyways...
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Reviewed By: aznboi408 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 03:03 PDT
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simply AMAZING!!!
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 08:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first one-shot lemon I've eva read n love so so soooooo much! I envy kagome!! Such lucky girl. You started out so wonderful with the hot day, her spying on the sexy God...*drools* I really really envy her! Then the teasing! Dam! that wuz awesome!!! She wuz so embarrass, and when she brought Inu to his release. Ok, this fic is so wonderful, that these word I say cannot describe it! Not at all! Oh, I love the ending part. It's like she went from innocent to a nympho. I could only imagine how miro would tease them when the others do find out. Your really blessed. And I am serious when i say this. If this one shot goes in any...ANY competition, this fic would win hands down! Keep it up!!!!^.^ Ja....
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Reviewed By: avoria [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 19:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are an awesome writer, and I rally enjoyed the fanfic.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_magic_1 (NSI) On: July 17, 2006 11:04 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The best one-shots I've ever read in all my knowing that fanfictions existed! What I just said was true. This is the best! I loved the ending lol. See ya later!
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Title: Lucky Girl
Reviewed By: yanna_enoah [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 09:57 PST
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This story took my breath away. Damn Kagome, lucky girl! She's living (throught this story) and experiencing how I imagine a first time for a woman should be. Inuyasha is so oozing with sex appeal...Tsk!
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Reviewed By: yasha_21_12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 17:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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hey i love this story so please update please i beg of u and i not beg 4 lots of so please UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Vernie B. On: September 26, 2005 21:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fic. ;)
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Reviewed By: viciousberries [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 09:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was actually the first Inuyasha fic I read that I liked. I haven't been in the fandom for very long, but you're a good writer and I enjoy your stories (yes plural but I'm too lazy to review more) a lot. It's too bad that this is a one-shot though, but I feel that way about all good one-shots. Thanks for an enjoyable read, and I hope you'll write more Inuyasha/Kagome fics soon. Luff, Suzanne.
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Reviewed By: Karulin On: August 26, 2005 01:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was very pleased by this fanfic. Not only is it well written, but it was obviously well thought out. There are many X-rated fanfics out there that just sort of throw Kagome and Inu Yasha together, without any thought at all. Your story seemed to play out how this would actually take place. They are apprehensive at first, unlike other fics where they're basically like "mmmmmok let's have sex!". Your style of writting is very good, and (of course) good grammar is always appreciated. I hope you decide to do other fanfictions. Great job!
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Reviewed By: kane shi megami [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 22:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS AWESOME! great details and descriptions of the situations. Keep up the good work you're a really talented writer.
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Reviewed By: Kiyonekage On: July 13, 2005 00:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so funny...i love how it was so awkward...it reminds me of the typical naive teenager i used to be...then of course, my friends opened my eyes to a world of perverted inuwendos(sp?)! It was great...it's the best i've read about Inu and Kagome in a long time...it truly fits them...sort of...i'm not so sure Inuyasha would follow his 'heart' per say...more like his 'other' head...but...it was good and i liked it...i'll have to read it again...it may help me work on my own writing style...Don't worry, i don't copy stories...just observe different styles of writing...your was nice and easy too follow too. From Kk
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: May 27, 2005 22:11 PDT
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Just found this story. Very nice! Well written, lots of loving smut. Just what I was hoping for. Thank you so much for the fun read!
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Title: GREAT STORY!!
Reviewed By: InuYasha_aijin On: May 21, 2005 10:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! One of the best I swear! Good job ^_~
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: InuKagsChild1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 12:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. that is really good. the lemon rocked, Inuyasha and Kagome werent out of character and i dont think you spelled anything wrong!! anyway it was really good!!
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