| "Gone Swimmin'" Reviews/Comments [ 63 ] |
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Reviewed By: SelfInducedHell On: March 14, 2009 20:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet Mother of Jesus. That. Was. Hot. Like, major hot. Like, so hot I nearly fainted, lol. But damn, you know how to write a lemon. And you know your story was good when I decide to take the time to review it (coming from a reader who forgets to review sometimes, hehe). But, honestly, this is worth a billion reviews. No jokes.
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: Eiko007 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2008 19:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!!!!!!!!!!! This was great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I felt a little worriend when Kagome "help" inuyasha and he hadn't do anything to "help" her... and the page seems to be ending... but no!!! there was a lot more!!! It was just wonferful!!! This fic was cute... was sweet... had a little drama... and hentai and all that a fic needs!!! really!!! I really love this fic!!! you write great... well good luck and happy new year xD... byebye
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Reviewed By: soraryu On: August 24, 2008 16:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fic! I read it linked through ff.net. Great writing, I love the deeetailed description of Inuyasha, naked, sleeping under the tree. Good job keeping the characters in character. You have a great talent for the pacing! Flirtatious Inuyasha is so sexy. A very, very tasteful lemon. Thanks for a beautiful story, one of my all-time favorites, and a great read!!!
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2008 15:38 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was entertaining.... lol.... i could actually really see that happening between them like that... lol.... except kago would probably be a little more naive about the whole thing... but great job no less!!!!
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Reviewed By: Mrs. Squarepants On: March 26, 2008 23:21 PDT
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WOOH. Damn, girl. You sure know how to write a lemon. Great job. I've always loved flirtatious Inuyasha. And I loved the smut.
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Title: gone swimming
Reviewed By: auronblaze On: December 06, 2007 12:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only thing that this story is missing is sequels and more arguments between inuyasha and kagome. And maybe some Competition / or a fight inuyasha and kouga over kagome. Other then that this was my favrite story yet. Hope you have the next chapter done soon. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!
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Title: AMAZING
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 21:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that was amazing. I couldn't stop reading. I really felt like I was watching an episode (one that would air on HBO!) WOW. that was...words just can't really say it. And what do you mean it had no plot? That was a GREAT Plot!!!! Wonderful work, just superb, absolutely terrific. Keep it up. You are now on my favorite author list. I can't wait to read more works!!!!!!! GREAT!
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Reviewed By: naturesadmiral [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 03:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm at a loss for words it was outstanding, amazing, awsome, cool, perfect. It was so well written i could practicaly feel the heat and the river and what comes after,;). Please write a sequel or two, just continue please,please,please,please
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Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 00:42 PDT
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Wow...uummm...is it hot in here or what? *fans self* Come on, I know I'm not the only one! GREAT JOB WRITE MORE!!!!!
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Title: OMFG LOVED IT
Reviewed By: *^_Inuyasha_Addict_^* On: April 07, 2007 09:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Loved Your Fic Inuyasha Was So... I can't explain but bravo, 1000 out of 50 for you(thats good) You're An Awesome Writer Keep Up The Exellent Work, Please Email Me If You Do Any Other Inu/Kags fan fics at: Yashie_And_Kags_Forever@hotmail.com Thanks Sooooo Much
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Reviewed By: eeviloverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 02:47 PST
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O_o oh...just lovely. characters are spot-on...and the story itself so very, VERY hot! hee. Great job!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 16:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Most excellent and beautifully written. This was awesome.
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Reviewed By: Kagomegirl162 On: January 03, 2007 17:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was so awsome one of the best fan stories i've ever read!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 20:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it! Sequel? Please?
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Reviewed By: Blasmurf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 16:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. Good job.
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