| "Chances" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Please Update!!!!
Reviewed By: RadicalEdward911 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story...its very creative and amazing!!!!! I'm so adding this story to my favorite list!!! Oh, and can I make a little quick comment here....can you make you chapters a little longer and can you seperate the paragrahps from the dialog..I had a wee bit of trouble of reading it, my reason: I'm a little far-sited...and I have trouble reading stories, books, etc. So if you can do this I really would apreseate it.
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Title: Too lazy to sign in
Reviewed By: Kamala Kali On: March 30, 2005 18:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Ohh, you should do inu/kag...because honesty, I just skip over all other couples parts, especially sess/rin. Kouga/Ayame might be fun to read too...only because you usually don't see them in depth. And Miroku/Sango are alright, but I see them as really only comic relief.
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Reviewed By: inufreak [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 15:05 CST
Comment/Review:
you should totally do inu/kag! update as soon as you can i would like to erad more! ^_^ ^_~
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Reviewed By: Random Reviewer On: March 29, 2005 00:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Sess and Rin 4eva!
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Title: Focus Relationship
Reviewed By: tajiya__ On: March 28, 2005 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your following chapters were interesting and an enjoyment to read. I'd love for you to focus on Sango and Miroku or Sess and Rin in your next chapters, as they are my favorite couples. Hope your next chapters will be as enjoying as your last.
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