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| "The Black Ice Alchemist" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: kirallie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 06:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay so that was a bit confusing. What exactly is happening to Ranma?
| Title: Black Ice is cool!
Reviewed By: HyperMan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 12:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say, I love the fic and I wish you would write longer stories even though you've mangaed to keep me hooked with only a few pages. I've never really seen much of FMA or Ranma, but I know what I like and this is it. While it is true that Ranma is a lot purer than any of the other characters, he's has been pridful and jelous, but not to the extreme as most other characters in the series. Will any other Ranma characters show back up though and how can Ranma be a guy in the rain? Sorry, I just had to mess with you about that one, keep up the Great Work!!!
| Title: Spoilers In Coments!!!
Reviewed By: Neko-chan911 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 00:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
(1)Ranma should be in female in the rain(2) Ranma was able to use alchemy without an alchemist circle. so far the only people i know of who can do that are ed , al, & Izumi (3) you can't create something out of nothing. ranma can make really hard black colored ice out of nothing. everyone else is really turning 1 thing to make another (4) Ranma has PRIDE. he always insult akane & when reyoga mastered the shi shi hokodan, ranma used a CONFIDDENCE based attack beat him. (5) you you know what Biack Ice really means? when the dirty roads get icy & some snow/dirt cover it/hide it from view, the roads get really slippery. and that's what black ice really is, hidden dirty ice on the roads and pavements in the winter time. the reason they call it black ice is because the ice is hidden by all the fallen snow and dirt that it's almost impossible to see (6) ranma is now too powerful. he needs to have some kind of weekness. there's no plot if there's no conflict (7) if Ranma is going to be able to use alchemy like Ed, whoever ranma tries to bring back from the dead (akane right?) will automatically turn into a Sin. either ranma has to always use a alchemy circle everytime he wants to transmute ice or he has to have tried to bring back someone who died *&* loose some physical part of himself (8) the title is FULLMETAL Alchemist. 1 word (9) you need to work on your grammar though... puncutation ~ Neko-chan911 neko_chan911@hotmail.com PS> IF WAS REALLY A DECENT FIC! COODO | Title: cool
Reviewed By: Sunknight1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 13:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep it up, It's a great idea, But if in that epiosed it was raining would't ranma be in girl form? Any way Keep it up.
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