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| "Digame" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: O_o
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2005 00:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really did like it. Your grammer's not the best at times, but fortunately you have that um, well "skill" I suppose, where the story's just so good that I don't give a damn if the grammer gets messed up. ^_^ But... so does Daisuke hear Dark say "I love you"? Or does it end with Dark sacrificing his own happiness for Daisuke? O_o Or, you know, am I just dumb. 'Cause that's likely the case...^_^
| Reviewed By: sweetums [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 18:12 CDT
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O_O ~twitches at teh fluffy-ness and done-ness~ WHY MUST IT END THERE?!?!!?!? ~ish totally sad and such~ I have nothing more to say.
| Title: DN ANGLE KICKS ASS! w00t!
Reviewed By: sweetums [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 18:11 CDT
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| Reviewed By: trapt_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I realize that I must have read the first two out of order, but at least now I'm doing it right. This was very sweet, though I can't remeber very much about book Six other than some thig about Krad, so I was having trouble placing it in context of setting...was that the book where DAisuke actually went into the Sage of Slep, or when Krad changed back into Satoshi in front of the Niwa family? (Sorry, it's been a while for me.) I understood the painting part...yes, I enjoyed reading what Dark thought about Daisuke painting..I always thought it had been odd that an art theif by night would *paint* for a school contest. And here you go again, driving me mad with curiosity over what 'Digame' means...I'm going to be wondering that until I fall asleep tonight, I can bet. I found a few grammatical errors, I think most were only missing commas under the rules of Direct Address. Something easily fixable if it's worth going back to re-upload. Overall it was pretty well-done.
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