| "Top Dog" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Makala On: September 03, 2007 13:19 CDT
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Such aperverted dog oh well but it was pretty funny
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 05:57 CST
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That last chapter was both so weird and so cool @ th e same time..... it's like a puppy version of the monk.... now we just need a temperamental poodle named Sango :)
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Title: Top Dog
Reviewed By: black tigeress On: April 01, 2005 00:26 CST
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I got to say that I found this story really interesting. I mean you look at it from Kagomes view and the dog is perfectly innocent, but you certainly made the dog into a pervert in the next chapter. I think it was very well done. And a certainly interesting twist with Kagome kissing Inuyasha. I mean heck, we all get those spurts of why the heck not, so why not Kagome. All in all I'm really enjoying this story. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 23:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aw! I thought it was just funny from Kagome's point of view, but when I read it from Inuyasha's side I felt sorry for him and it did seem kind of unfair. XD You did a really really really good job of capturing the different ways the two characters see the world and each other. ^_^ I can't wait for the last chapter!
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Title: Congratulations on the first chapter!
Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 22:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol, i loved it! it has such good humor, i was laughing the whole way. XD and ouch! the slobber comment.. oh... man. But nice coverup! buwahahah. I cannot wait for the next chapter! Godspeed, mun!
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