| "Twisted Light" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Himitsu_Dorobou On: October 16, 2006 23:04 CDT
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Ah, I remember when you wrote this. 'Member when you brought up that one line, about the porcupine? Cracked up with that one; mentioned it to anyone who came within 3 feet for weeks. *grins* And it's still good now. Noticed some grammar issues I hadn't caught--gyah! >_< Irritiating. But yeah. Very nice plot, greatly amusing and original. Though the Yami/Ryou was very cringe-worthy, I especially liked when Bakura was trying to beat the crap out of Yami. *makes a face* Didn't quite make up for that though, maybe you should've made him get beat a bit more to compensate. *laughs * And no, not corny at all, I thought...I really liked the ending. Very philosophical.
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Title: Winner...
Reviewed By: devildice708(didn't feel like logging in) On: March 30, 2005 12:56 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Darkness disguised as the light...I like that! And it wasn't a corny ending either. The lemons...they make me cringe a little but I like em too. If this doesn't win, I don't know what will.
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 20:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Great!! please contine (maybe lemon) but even without it would be great!
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 14:38 CST
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corny ending? girl what are you talking about?!?!??! In my opinion you're ending put to words how every R/B feels about them(well..those that don't make baku rape Ryou at least) It's not corny...it's deep, and I totally loved it. I've been waiting for something like this...i hope you win the evil spring thingie, you deserve it.
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Reviewed By: alonegirl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 12:07 CST
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Hey haven't heard form you in a while. I really liked this story. I'm kinda glad this one didn't have a lemon in it and it proves that you can do some kick ass stuff. Yeah the ending was a bit corny but I still liked it I hope you keep going with this. You still rock out loud. Have fun a good luck ^-^
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