| "A Walk for a Thought...A Kiss for a F*ck" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Schwarz tot schwarz das bloot [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 06:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, my gosh! You have so got to write a proper story about these two! I would love to see you write a proper story about these two! This little, one-shot was wonderful. I thank you for writing these VincentxCloud pairings, and I would love to see more of them!
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Reviewed By: ORK On: September 11, 2005 08:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ignore you're second reviewer's comment about Vincent being OOC; its a fanfiction, and if we are talking about characters acting like themselves, then Vincent talking about Cloud in a fluffy way is the LEAST of what is out of chatacter in Final Fantasy yaoi. I personally loved you're story. It was really descriptive and sensual.
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Reviewed By: Rychelle On: June 27, 2005 19:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your fanfic is very hot vincent dominante ass he's so sexy and cloud well he sexy too pleading little vixen >=P your fic is sexy and hot
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Reviewed By: sephi's stalker On: May 14, 2005 21:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
umm I like the idea for your story and the descritions were great however I doub that Vincent, even if he was the horniest he had ever been, would ever act like that. I think it would be Cloud who would make the first mover or it just sort of happens you know none of this I are you cold you look flushed shit. but is was a good story none the less hope to read more from you.
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Reviewed By: Aku Kyuketsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! I'm ur first reveiwer! Yay! I like these little onshots. You seem to like to do the hint of fluffy after the hard core stuff. Ah well, I enjoyed it!!
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