| "One week" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
| Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Havenoname [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is good man! I like it a lot! Especially at the end were Naru gets sent flying to the wall. You have grammer mistakes here and there, but it has not distracted me from reading your fic. I hope you can have the next chapter come out soon. Havenoname signing off!
|
Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: yenom [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2005 08:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That the way to end a chapter kicking Naru ass. Plus the rest of it is good too, so keep up the great work
|
Reviewed By: Schwarz On: September 12, 2005 20:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
About time, a was getting worried since this is one of my favorite stories. Keep up the good work and update soon.
|
Reviewed By: blackshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
took ya long enougth!
|
Title: Ok
Reviewed By: Jehuty Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good but no offence, you might want to bump up the rating.
|
Reviewed By: Big Smoke On: June 16, 2005 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This story is great, it is an original idea that is very good but there is a few mispellings, but other then that it is great.........wow I never knew Haruka could act like that, she is always so calm, except the random act of violance once in a while. Well please post the next chapter soon
|
Reviewed By: blackshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon!
|
Reviewed By: Scwharz On: June 01, 2005 13:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
Finally, its about time you updated, but anyway it is looking good. I hope that when you finish you can make a sequel of it. update soon PLEASE!!!
|
Title: I thought you were dead
Reviewed By: yo-yo On: May 29, 2005 12:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HURRY UP AND UPDATE THE STORY SOON!
|
Title: Not bad (again)
Reviewed By: Tury On: May 28, 2005 03:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for writing more. The style I don't have a problem with, but you should really run it through the spell-checker sometime. Keep 'em "cumming" (Bad joke, I know, I'm sorry.) Tury
|
Reviewed By: gopy On: May 25, 2005 16:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really liked this. continue to write more! that would please us, yes yes. much pleasure to our selves it would be!!
|
Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Tury On: May 04, 2005 03:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice, really nice. (not in a sarcastic way either) I like it. Angsty, with plenty of fire. Keep it up, please. Tury
|
Reviewed By: seina246 On: April 23, 2005 12:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Threr are very few stories with this pairing, I hope that you will continue this story.
|
Reviewed By: Jason C On: April 01, 2005 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its okay. Will you continue?
|
Reviewed By: Schwarz On: March 30, 2005 15:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Interesting story, you rarely see this matchup but is a good one. I do hope you continue with it to see how it develop specially on how they will work on a possible relationship. also it will be a good stress-reliver for the poor boy.
|
| Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] |
