| "Forbidden Love" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: always [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The grammar problems are so minor that I didn't even notice, and your story line is really great. Please continue and you will forever be on my favorites list! You're doing a great job!!!
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Reviewed By: morbid romantic [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 00:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am such a sucker for TatxRyu fanfiction. I thought it was great! All you need is a good beta to catch your grammar, punctuation, and spelling errors. Easy problems to fix. Could use a bit more detail to. You go from spoken phrase to spoken phrase with clipped descriptions. More would be nice. Cheers!
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Title: I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: MangaChild420 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God I absolutely love it. PLEASE CONTINUE PLEASE CONTINUE OR I WILL TRULLY DIE. I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE I WANT TO KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!! PLEASE!!!! PLEASE!!!!! I BEG OF YOU!!!! CONTINUE!!!! AND YOU WILL CONTINUE TO SEE MY REVIEWS!!!!!! ~MangaChild420
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