Title: Great job
Reviewed By: Ladybugg## On: March 29, 2005 17:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Normally I'm a big Trunks/Pan shipper. Though I have to admit that I liked your original character, and I thought that he was cute and sweet. So I am going to be anxiously awaiting chapter 2. Until then, keep up the great work.
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