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"Love Is In The Crown" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ]
 Title: Love Is In The Crown
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 18, 2006 19:09 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
 Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 16, 2005 15:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
OOOHH!!!!!!!!!!write more!!!!Hurry!!!!!I'm dying of anticapation!!!!this is a cool story!!!!!!!!!! email me at:Cinnamonroll_620@yahoo.com when you update.
 Title: ok
Reviewed By: animefreak2234 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 12, 2005 06:49 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
ok see here is the thing in you description all you said was "mores coming" but where is it i mean you there would be more but i seee none you let me down because as your autoristic dutuies come you neglect them so on the happier side if you write more i wont be abliged to kill you so please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 update!!!
 Title: why?!?!
Reviewed By: animefreak2234 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 01, 2005 10:59 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
why havent you written anything more that was a really good storie from beginning to end wow it blew me away two thumbs waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyy up i love it more please please more!!!
 Title: Love Is In The Crown
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 07, 2005 13:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
 Reviewed By: Darks_little_Pet (aka Hayashi Panthera)  On: April 01, 2005 20:37 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
so far the story is going pretty good. Although it was pretty odd to throw Kouga and Ayame in the mix ^.~ You should also have made the mode of transportation more modern as in a car maybe? But apart from that the story's great! Update soon!!
 Reviewed By: Nyt [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 01, 2005 00:22 CST
Comment/Review:
This is my first review so don't kill me if i don't write what you want to hear. But so far i like what i am reading and i had to *pout* when there wasn't more. Hope you are able to post some more of your fanfic soon.
 Title: hmm....
Reviewed By: sesshomarusgirl56(not signed in)  On: March 29, 2005 21:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Well your story has potential but I don’t think you have the facts straight is Ayame, sessh,Inu and Kouga demons if so how can they be born from the same mother? Also If they are in modern times why do they ride in a carriage It would make more sense to be in a limo. I’m not trying to flame you I just wanted to say some constructive criticism, your grammar and are okay but it could be a lot better, I’m just suggesting that you rethink the storyline better so its not confusing to read. Please don’t take this as a flame! -_- hee I would like to be your beta if you are interested email me at whiteplumrain56@comcast.net

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