| "Shorties Watchin Shorties" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: SilverKit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it so far update plz
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Reviewed By: I wrote the fricken thing On: June 10, 2005 21:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
what the hell is wrong with my style!! *sigh*...thanx guys for reviewing!! my computer has a virus it took me a half hour to sign on to my computer...i just wanted to let you all know i probably wont be wriing for a while...sorry. love yall!
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Title: Shorties Watchin' Shorties
Reviewed By: DarkBlade69 On: June 09, 2005 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more plz! I really want to know how it ends... u've gotten more hooked already.
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Title: hummm...
Reviewed By: madame shannon On: June 03, 2005 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
well well very interesting pair, i hopw that there will be some back story so that we can see how they came to be in the same place. your style of writing is okay and can use some more practice but the potential is definetly there. your chapters are just a little too small, but hey there was enough there to peak ppls interest. keep working hard! here a rose for your efforts @---^---
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Reviewed By: Mika Rieu On: May 16, 2005 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story itself was very creative, I like the idea of these two together. Never would have thought of it otherwise. They way you write is kind of like how others write so that wasn't to thrilling but I know that its hard to find ones own style of writting. Other then this I really liked it and hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: sparklerfish [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 11:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
good stuff, good stuff! keep the chapters coming.
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Reviewed By: Rena aka MystWynd On: April 17, 2005 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is very good. I like the idea. Your chapters are a bit short, but everyone has their own writing style ^_^. Anyway I'd love to read more so please do update.
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