| "Two souls ... two destinies" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Squall'sScar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 12:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good fic, but the grammer errors made it nails on a chalkboard. |
Reviewed By: hannah On: April 07, 2002 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay i really like that van and hitomi don't love each other any more. marta and van make a really cute couple. the idea is really cool. thanks for translating it into english, but sometimes the tenses are wrong. it is a really awsome fic!!!! |
Reviewed By: Cherry 2 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2002 13:10 CST
Comment/Review:
awesome dat's about all i can say |
Reviewed By: Cherry 2 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2002 12:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've read all of her fic an dey r just gr8 she's just posted a new one called 2 fulfill you destiny and i can't wait 2 see the rest c ya 4 now
signed
*********************cherry-san*******************
************************************************** |
Reviewed By: Falconess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2002 18:51 CST
Comment/Review:
This is really awsome, can't wait to see the rest of them |
Reviewed By: Cherry 2 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2002 07:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is [like i sez b 4] awesome but i dont think i cud bear waiting so plzzzzzzzzzz continue |
Reviewed By: Cherry 2 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2002 06:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is one awesome fic an i am bein totally honest i gots the plot now but i'm not sayin owt coz sum of u ppl read d reviews b 4 readin the fic i am like totally enjoin dis fic i'd giv it 11 out of 10 but i can't **LOL**typical of me any1 agree wit me email me at kw11quidditch@aol.com |
Reviewed By: PhoenixG... Phoenix2k04@hotmail.com On: November 15, 2001 17:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey, this fic is pretty good for someone who isn't English. What language do you speak? Anyway... Back to the point of why I'm writing this review. I love the plot of your fic, but your translations need some work. I'd be happy to fix them up for you before you post them. (In other words, If you want, I'd like to be your editor.) Well email me!!! Your's truly!!!Phoenix!!
Phoenix2k04@hotmail.com |
