| "Another Loss" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 17:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
LOVE IT! ^-^
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Title: I FOUND THE CHAPTER!
Reviewed By: Blackrose451 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 10:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! YOU UPDATED! AND IT WORKED! just like you told me in the e-mail! man i can't wait for the next chapter! please update ASAP! well g2g going out for breakfast....BYE BYE! TTYL!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Domi-kun
Reviewed By: Akikazu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 20:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this story but it's a little hard when the previous chapter has been deleted
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Reviewed By: Hiya!!!! On: May 07, 2005 11:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The suspense! Plz update soon I can`t wait for you to update it. It a very awseom story so far! Keep up the good work. YAY!!!
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Title: Keep it up
Reviewed By: Kagome_and_Hiei_Lover On: May 06, 2005 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep ot up. Please I have been waiting for while.now. So keep it up.
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Reviewed By: lgko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
does anyone know how to make the rest of the story visable? cuz i am having problems as you can see
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 17:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
how do i find this story on ff.net? that website is confusing and hard to navigate.
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Reviewed By: Saphire Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 19:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
THIS SOUNDS REALLY GOOD!!! Please get the chapters up asap!
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Title: HELLO
Reviewed By: Dark Miko89 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 17:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
HELLO HELLOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! ARE YOU THERE. (Bangs on computer screen) wake up and get to writing alrighty! I wanna know whats gonna happen or..........ELSE........face the wrath of DARK MIKO89 HHHHHAAAAAAAA!! just kidding please update (puppy eyes..think InuYasha) ^_^
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Title: It sounds great so Far Do more
Reviewed By: Kagome_and_Hiei_Lover On: April 11, 2005 03:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It was great so far. Keep it going. A Kagome and Ed pair is realy good. If you do in the Full Metal Alchemist world great. And to have Kagome with autometal is realy cool. Keep it up!!
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Reviewed By: princess_of_light [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
kagome changing into a chimera....NO NEVER how would that go into the story who would want to be a chimera try powers like she doesn't need a alchemy circle like ed that will work better
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Title: hello
Reviewed By: lgko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i'll think about you suggestion, but it is my story...MY STORY!!!! so listen up i'll keep trying to get it on the site but if it does not work go to FanFiction.Net and i will post it there instead untill further notice
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Blackrose451 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 16:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey! there's not even a chapter~! thats not fair!totally NOT fair! ?I mean Come on! it sounded so great i clicked the link but then i find out THERE'S NO FUNKIN CHAPTER! GRRRRRRRRRRRR SO MAD AT YOU! DON'T MAKE HER have that power~~~~! give her something else like power over wateror ice or even the elements!
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Title: lgko
Reviewed By: lgko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 07:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok it is me the writer i was going towards the Kag/Ed pairing but you people can vote on a pairing of your own just remember Kagome is the only Inuyasha character in this story k? now how the hell do you get a story on to this web site , it is so much easier on FF.net so please help me people!!! review the answer
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 17:24 CST
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about kagome turning into a chimera...NO...the plot already sounds solid and it doesn't need anything to glorify the characters....just have Kags able to alchemize stuff without a circle thingy like Ed...what are the pairings for this story?
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