| "Another Loss" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nami_wave_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 15:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Luv it keep going!
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Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 17:11 CST
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pleez update this story! i want to know wat happens to Kagome! and is this on FF.net? pleez tell me if it is. My email is: Cinnamonroll_620 @ Yahoo. com [take out spaces]. thankz! LATERZ
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Title: ch.2
Reviewed By: Darkness Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2006 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love where your story is going so far and I can't wait for you to update!!^^.um heres my idea Kagome is visiting her parents grave and a few minutes after she got there our two adorable alchemist show up to visit their mothers grave,and they meet under weird circumstances(sp) Kagome totally ignores them and continues crying over her parents grave and Ed and Al feel sorry for her for having to loose her parents just like they did. Al,being the sweet boy(in armor) he is,talks to Kagome and learns her name.Ed is skeptical when he sees her automail arm and leg and demands how she lost her real body parts.Kagome starts crying and tells them of how her parents died and how she tried to bring them back.Ed and Al feels symphaty towards the broken girl and Al asked maybe she could come over to Winry's house to get to know each others problem better. Kagome feels alot better that she was not alone in the same situation for Al and Ed did almost the exact same thing and how Al became a soul entrapped in armor. there thats all I could think of and I know that Ed isn't that trusting to a few people and that he is sorta OOC,but thats all I could come up with!! CAN'T WAIT FOR YOU TO UPDATE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Go Drink Pine-sol [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2005 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY HELL UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: ok
Reviewed By: Killinthenight On: August 17, 2005 13:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well it was good so Update I think you could go far with this story
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Reviewed By: Bev111 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY YAY YAY! I haven`t ever seen a story so fantastic, so original, so awesome! PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ! Update soon if you need any help with the story you can e-mail me at txcowgirl624@aol.com I also have a question how do you put the text part on that is needed to make a story? I have a story I just don`t know how to put it down.
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 17:04 CDT
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LOVE IT! ^-^
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Title: I FOUND THE CHAPTER!
Reviewed By: Blackrose451 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 10:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! YOU UPDATED! AND IT WORKED! just like you told me in the e-mail! man i can't wait for the next chapter! please update ASAP! well g2g going out for breakfast....BYE BYE! TTYL!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Domi-kun
Reviewed By: Akikazu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 20:23 CDT
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I love this story but it's a little hard when the previous chapter has been deleted
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Reviewed By: Hiya!!!! On: May 07, 2005 11:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The suspense! Plz update soon I can`t wait for you to update it. It a very awseom story so far! Keep up the good work. YAY!!!
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Title: Keep it up
Reviewed By: Kagome_and_Hiei_Lover On: May 06, 2005 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep ot up. Please I have been waiting for while.now. So keep it up.
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Reviewed By: lgko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
does anyone know how to make the rest of the story visable? cuz i am having problems as you can see
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 17:29 CDT
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how do i find this story on ff.net? that website is confusing and hard to navigate.
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Reviewed By: Saphire Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 19:30 CDT
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THIS SOUNDS REALLY GOOD!!! Please get the chapters up asap!
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Title: HELLO
Reviewed By: Dark Miko89 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 17:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
HELLO HELLOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!! ARE YOU THERE. (Bangs on computer screen) wake up and get to writing alrighty! I wanna know whats gonna happen or..........ELSE........face the wrath of DARK MIKO89 HHHHHAAAAAAAA!! just kidding please update (puppy eyes..think InuYasha) ^_^
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