| "A Hardened Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2009 06:13 CST
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this is a good story so far
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Reviewed By: kitten_meru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 16:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Another thing, if you ask for reviews, people start reviewing more. sometimes people assume you don't want reviews if you don't ask. (personal experience) and reviews give constructive criticism. just work with what you have, and try your best to get more.
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Title: ehehe
Reviewed By: kitten_meru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
good enough storyline, but i really REALLY didn't like that she's mating fred. gross. and your chapters are WAY to short, and WAY to choppy. work on a chapter for a whole day or a week even, make it GOOD. THEN post it. I'm a writer too, and people really like my story. take my advice, and look at other storys, get ideas, improvise. get it done.
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Title: WOOT!
Reviewed By: Mrs cake [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You rock! Continue! Is Rin Sesho's wife/mate? PLEASE UPDATE!
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: akume (vanessa2000_78582@yahoo.com) On: May 03, 2006 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow! I really do like this story, eventhough some of the chapters are supper short. Nevertheless, you've successfully incorporated two of my favorite series into one. So, with that said I do hope you add another chapter or two soon. Until next time. Bye.
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Reviewed By: Jezebel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 12:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Please please pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease update PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE....
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Reviewed By: cehavard90 On: April 25, 2006 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Youkai_ofuda [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 07:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE oh please UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: KawaiiKoneko89 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 18:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic please update!!!
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Reviewed By: Twice987 On: December 08, 2005 07:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OKAY YOU SO HAVE TO UPDATE SOON!!I love this story! Its kinda sad that her and Siri don't get along because they both have a mischievous side...anyway PLZ UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY!!! I LOVE IT A LOT!!! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: TIPSYMIKO On: May 07, 2005 22:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT RIGHT NOW.PLEZZZZ UPDATE!SOON!
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Reviewed By: RoxyFoxyKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 13:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
i love it love it love it!!!!!!!!!cant wait til next chapter!!!!!!!!please update soon!!!!!!^_~
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