| "Soak up the Sun" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Hikari Girl On: September 14, 2005 21:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im so happy!!! Im also sad that the fic is over. T_T Sorry I wasnt there to see every chapter when it was put up on it's fist day's. My internet company decided to sell. I know it's early and all because I'v onaly read like 30 fanfics(I know that's not alot, but bear with me here) But I would like to declaire this "Soak Up The Sun" fanfict as my #1 fic of all time!!!! This was my first fanfiction I ever read, and is my favorit fanfiction I'v ever read. It will probubley be the best ever in the entire world, and forever! Oh, I also would like to say congraglatoin's on going to gradguate! I Hope you have an awsom life and get a great corier in what you are going for! I hope you will write more stories, But I will alwas thik this fic will be the best forever. Well good by and hope to here from you agen in the feutcher!!! (sorry about my horible spelling) YOUR FRIEND, Hikari Girl ^_^
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Reviewed By: dmyy20 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 10:21 CDT
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Hiiiiiii, ish dmyamiyugi/yamiyugifanadic (had to change meh sn here ^^;) Anyway, great lemon! Is that your second one O.O; damn, it was good :D meh second lemon i ever wrote was not nearly that good ^_^ Great job on it, love this ending! Can't wait to read you're next story soon! Ja ne! DMYamiyugi~
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Reviewed By: must_be_dreaming On: July 10, 2005 11:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"No, it's okay. I was just a little scared and it doesn't hurt that bad anymore. Please show me our serenity Atemu, I want to become one with you mind, body, and soul." NOT to insult( I love this fic! One of your best!) but that could have been translated to " Dude Just fuck me" I'm so sorry just my humor indosed mind wanted me to review that,but great fic!
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Reviewed By: Hell_Kat9-11 On: July 09, 2005 10:44 CDT
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Damn, it's over already?! Oh well... thought you ended it in the best way possible! Hope your next story is a blast!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 07:16 CDT
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Good story, I can hardly wait for your next one. HAppy Birthday!!!!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 03:45 CDT
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I love the ending! I wish there was a sequel but it was great.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 03:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just started reading this and I love it. I am only sorry, I didn't find it earlier. Great story.
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Title: Surprise
Reviewed By: Yami no Jean On: June 28, 2005 07:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! I didn't know you were also the author of "Arranged" I
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Reviewed By: SilverWing147 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 18:30 CDT
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Gaasp! What is Yuugi's name! Gasp. And feel free to post ANY lemons for this story, just not on FF.net cos those guys will BOOT YOU! *scared look*. Loveliness!
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Reviewed By: Hikari Girl On: June 10, 2005 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is awsom! I have ben reading a lot of ficks for the site my friend and I have, and the where terible.(not to put enyone down but...) This is a relife! The story line is easy to folow, and it has awsom spelling and gramer. It also has my favorit manga series, Gravitation! ( U go author!) And as an artest...(sereousley. I drow for websites and my work has ben in art meusums ) Enyway this is a great story and it is updated constentley, so it shows the auther is dedicated. So please write the next chapter soon. I know u said it woud be a wile so I wanted to mak sure u know there are people who love your work and are weighting. So PLEASE start writing soon.Well to thous who read thes revews, here's my advice...READ IT!~_^
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Reviewed By: Cerise On: April 23, 2005 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Honestly? You have good writing skills (although you really should cut back on the purple prose), the story's interesting, if a little overdone. However, you mustn't know how real relationships work. One date does not constitute a relationship. And if Yami got that worked up over Yugi denying he was his boyfriend, then Yugi's better off without him. Too much drama, too fast.
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Reviewed By: jaq On: April 23, 2005 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like how the plot has been set and can't wait to hear more soon!
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Reviewed By: Cairyn Sandstrom [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 14:39 CDT
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Lovely! It's brilliant! I don't remember reading anything like this before, but then again, I don't remember what I ate today. ^.^'
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Reviewed By: michew [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooo this is soooo good!!! update soon!!!
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