| "An Unusual Cure" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: tasukete_onegai [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really need to get this beta'd, there were MANY spelling and grammar mistakes. I had a hard time enjoying the actual content because I couldn't decide whether to look for the next mistake in your spelling or not.
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Reviewed By: dk_joy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 12:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Cuteness! Go sap! Seriously - I liked it a lot. If it wasn't already done, I'd say please update soon, but...I'll just say that I loved it and please keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2005 09:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
I finally caught up! That was a great chap! I love your work. You're really good.
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Title: chap 5
Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2005 08:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay! They made it and Heero is...'attacking' Duo. I wonder if Duo can 'handle' him? I guess I'll have to read to find out, ne.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2005 08:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Woooh! Duo and Heero action at the end! That makes up for the kinky yet hentai-less scene. *skips off to read the next chap*
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Title: chap 2
Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2005 08:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
O_O What's wrong with him?! Oh, duh, I have to read the next chap. I really really like it.
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Title: chap 1
Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2005 08:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have not the slightest clue what's going on but I am very interested in how this turns out. Those guys taking about the moniters should be castated in the worst way for hurting Hee-chan.
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Reviewed By: dk_joy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I liked it! Is there gonna be more? Please keep going! It was funny that Heero had that little argument with himself and then just started making out with Duo.
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 15:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Duo! Heero! If they don't end up safe...You don't wanna know.
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Reviewed By: dk_joy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Coolness! Keep going! Hope they make it out OK! But how...Heero's weak and Duo's knocked out...and they probably didn't tell anyone where they were...
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Reviewed By: dk_joy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ah! Keep going! Can't wait to see what happens when they find everything out. That was a great chapter. Worried me for a while there.
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Reviewed By: dk_joy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is really getting good - please keep going! I hope Heero doesn't hurt Duo...
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Reviewed By: renee_dmrs [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 13:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cool. update soon
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 17:20 CST
Comment/Review:
Ooh! Put up another chappie soon please.
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Title: wonderful
Reviewed By: Lauritzen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 15:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is excellent! Keep it up I wanna see what Happens :) *dreams of tile shattering under heero's gun and all that cold water spurting about.*
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