| "Delightfully Disastrous" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: chap 3&2
Reviewed By: tolaxytosighnin@llthetime On: May 22, 2005 11:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aw that was so sweet! whe u finish i am so nominating u for a inuguild award thingy! soon as i find out how. meh keep writing!
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Title: chap 1
Reviewed By: tolazytosighnin@llthetime On: May 22, 2005 10:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was pretty awsome! if i wrote somthing on wordpad it would look like crap.ur story is really good but insted of saying how she lost consiousness and then felt the arms u should reverse it. Too lat now anyways. Your Humble fan Sunshine______Angel ^^
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Reviewed By: JRJB On: May 06, 2005 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you ever going to continue? I'm curious as to what is going to happen. Please continue, it's a great story.
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Reviewed By: XxDemonic_PrincessxX [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm...sounds good but I am wondering is this going to be a Sesshomaru and Kagome story or an Inuyasha and Kagome story?????other then that it is very good..also since you are using word pad just copy the text and paste it on a hotmail message sheet spell check it there then copy and paste it on the word page..thats what i do... ~Demonic Princess~
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Reviewed By: Goddess 0f Shadow On: March 30, 2005 23:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Hi! I liked your story very much! Please review soon! ^.^ I will be waiting!
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