| "Fairytale" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Perfecto!!!
Reviewed By: Miyu_Starfighter [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 15:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Job! I love the fluffy at the end! You did a great job!!!! I loved it!!!
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Reviewed By: solarscorpio [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 14:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i liked it! it was short, sweet and to the point!
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Title: very sweet
Reviewed By: sueb262 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 04:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
really, this was charming -- i think you captured just the right tone for what you set out to do. however, whenever authors make kenshin speak sharply (in other than moments of action or battle), it never rings true for me -- it seems to go against my view of his character.
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Reviewed By: Ayanami-san [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 05:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so Kawaii, doesn't Kenshin call Kaoru 'miss kaoru' not 'lady kaoru'???? ^_^
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