| "Nightwing: A Dark Beginning" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
Title: Yeah, they are.
Reviewed By: DarkAngelsTears [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lemons are allowed, you just have to mark the story as "M" which is equal to "R" and warn about it in the summary.
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Title: So, what more is there?
Reviewed By: JebusOfNazareth [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 09:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'd review this on my FF account, but I get enough alerts there as it is. Plus MM allows for 'unedited' versions as it is. I think that there was a bit of rushing in certain places. Raven's resolution of Nightwing's actions is an example. I must know what music you listen to when you are writing. It seems kinda influential, but that could be me.
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Reviewed By: kalinchan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 15:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter, a little wierd though. I've been waiting for Raven and Rich to tell each other they love each other. I liked the symbolisim you used for when Nigthwing is getting better.
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Title: Yeah
Reviewed By: JebusOfNazareth [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah. This is dark and gritty. Don't like the way that Star and BB were handled, but hey, story is good enough that I can forgive it. Yeah, I need more.
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: lyncea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 04:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my goodness... I just started reading all your chapters and I COULD NOT STOP! I love this darker side of Robin/Nightwing and your storyline is just amazing, and captivating, and suspenseful! I seriously CANNOT wait till you come out with the rest of these chapters! I hope to be surprised and further amazed, not to mention satisfied! I love where this storyline is going! You have DEFINITELY gained yourself a new fan! keep up the excellent work, and I'll stay tuned for more chapters! oh by the way, good luck with your finals: i'm doing mine, too! It's a nice escape from all the studying! THANK YOU FOR THIS!
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Title: A-huh?
Reviewed By: DarkAngelsTears [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jackie: DUDE! I had no idea that you were dyslexic! I didn't notice any mistakes in S/G, if there were any then I just read right over them. Normally Sarah would be reviewing with me but note the rating. Note her age. Way to go on the story! We'll be writing stuff too, watch out for it! LOVE the story! =^-^= Luv and Huggles!
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Title: scratch that
Reviewed By: kalinchan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 17:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Forget waht I said last time ch.7 is my favorite. I loved it. I found a lot of it funny. I'm glad to hear there's going to be a lot of action in the next chapter.Don't forget the romance though when balenced it makes action a whole lot better.
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Reviewed By: kalinchan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 11:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great job. I think ch.6 is my favorite so far. I loved the part in the pool hall. Keep this up. Two questions. 1) Will Raven & Rich's phone conversation be in ch.7? 2) What's the name of your Inuyasha fic?
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Reviewed By: Omega_Red9 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 13:01 CDT
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yo, thanks for the mention in chapter five. Kepp up the good work. I really like the story.
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Reviewed By: kalinchan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your fic. It's one of the best I've read. First, it's a raven/robin. Second, it has the Titans in a postion of almost being broken up. Third, it has Red X in it. The only problems are slight grammer and spelling mistakes. Don't worry about that much though.Last thing are you going to have it that the Titans kick Starfire and Beastboy out? I like them ,but it would seem apropriate for what they did.
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: InvincibleInuYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love everything about your story. It's very good. I like how Robin has died and is reborn into Nightwing. Hard for some to believe, you know. It's good that the Titans suck now. Robin basically did all of the work. He deserves more credit for what he does. Teaming up with Red X was great too. The bad-boy-who-is-too-good-to-actually-be-bad with the good-boy-who-died-and-turned bad. Yeah. Very good turn of events. Very enjoyable story, I must say. But I think I've already told you that before many times. Please include more blood and gore. That makes everybody happy! ^o^
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Reviewed By: Blood_x [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
try to make it longer but still not take to long to update. other than that NICE!!!
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Reviewed By: gfunkcui03 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 10:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
From what I've read this is turning out to be a very good fic. Keep up the good work and keep updating. Thanx.
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Reviewed By: Omega_Red9 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good. I really like how you use a third person point of view to help express the events going on in Robin's life. It really allows the reader to view it as if he were standing right there. I would recommend using a little bit more imagism since you are trying to develop a view on Robin's psyche without using first person narrative. Perhaps show his darkness affecting him phisically, or maybe the backround of the headquarters or something. Also, it probably wouldn't hurt to add a brief metaphor in a chapter or two in order to foreshadow coming events. By the way, nightwing's eyes are blue. I really hope to see more chapters soon. I don't suppose you could check out some of my stuff and leave a review. The more constructive criticism the better right?
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