| "Somnium enim Fortuna" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Washugreen18 On: April 28, 2005 16:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Dude, totally keep writing that. It really seems like it could pan out to something interesting if you don't drop the ball. Keep up the good work
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Title: n_n
Reviewed By: Getas-PanChan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So added to my favorite list... Please dont make us wait for an update, I've read a LOT of BV fanfictionf, but this is truly an original work of art, please continue. There are a few spelling errors here and there, but that can be fixded with spell check, everything else is lovely...
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: Vegeta's Mate~not logged in~ On: April 05, 2005 15:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAHOO! Great fic, I can't wait for more. Very nice way to begin what seems to be a great story. You are so added to my fav list! UPDATE SOOOOOOONNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: fyrechylde [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 03:08 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yay! I got the first review! *grinz* Well, let me start off by saying that you have me intrigued. I like the direction this fic is going and I hope to see more! Your grammar is good but I did notice one or two spelling errors. Try reading this aloud to yourself and you'll catch them. I love the last part where she finds the handprints on her skin...very nice. I hope see more work from you soon!
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