| "Danse de vie:Un étage en Ahiru et Fakir’s moment (Dance of Life:A story of Ahiru and Fakir’s moments)" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: NICE!!!
Reviewed By: Cheesy girl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 04:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cosmo: Hi! Cheesy: WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE???!!! Ahiru: QUACK!!! (DON'T EVEN THINK ABOUT IT!!! I'M A DUCK!!!) Fakir: Stop it! Cheesy: Say the words. Fakir and Ahiru: NO!/QUACK! (NO!/NO!) Cheesy: Fakir: Alright! Continue writing! Ahiru: Quack! (Yeah!) Cheesy:
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Title: Neat fic!
Reviewed By: Nala5 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 09:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fanfic! Wish I could write like that. I love Ahiru and Fakir. The ending of this one was funny. I loved the whole play thing! And in the other chapters when they were fighting the raven and afterwards. It was sooo real! At least in my mind. So, good visuals and character features! Keep on writing you\'re really good! You should post them on fanfiction.net! Lata
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Title: that was great
Reviewed By: Hemino08 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 02:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great keep up the good work k? i enjoy reading ur fanfics. ^_~
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