| "The Secret of the Fire Rat Haroi" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 17:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
good job, this is a sweet fic.
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Title: Wow.........
Reviewed By: TotalMeggy On: May 25, 2005 15:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was ab beautiful story the way you described it......it was so nice I almost cried Good work! :)
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Reviewed By: Animeluver1368 loged out On: April 18, 2005 18:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
All right I just found out you misspelled something. It is haori not haroi. But still good. LOL
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Reviewed By: Animeluver1368 loged out On: April 18, 2005 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That has to be one of the best writtings I have ever read. There was no spelling mistakes and it was completley original. It almost made my tear up. All in all I loved it. Good work, I think I might also check if you have any other works, and if so I'll review em if they are as good as this one.
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