| "D-Day" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Kai Hagara On: July 12, 2005 00:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
I kinda grasp what you're getting at butyou have waaaaaaay too much comady. If this was serious it would be soo cool. Also Raven dosn't talk or for that matter act like that at all. But hell it seems like everyone will screw up Raven anyways.
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Reviewed By: IG On: June 30, 2005 16:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice chapter Kiko. I liked it, little weird though. Though it was quite entertaining. Oh and I just figured I'd best tell you....(Jerks over shoulder with thumb) I acidentally broke the lock on the door. Teen Titans: (Start pouring in through broken door) InuGhost: Anyway nice story. I really liked it.
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Title: D-Day
Reviewed By: some girl On: May 19, 2005 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! good beginning-- UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!! as a fellow fan-fic author i know how hard it is to get upoff my butt.....maby thats just me...hmmm...anyway-- looking foward to the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: InuGhost [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 14:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmm this sounds interesting. I'm suprised I inspired you to write this. Hopefully the Titans will still fall for the trap. ^-^ update soon please
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